[Denied] white list again

[nightreper1 0]

 

 

MY minecraft username is nightreaper1

 

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: protect from cyber bullying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? i found it off of YouTube and i thought it really cool you guys put a lot of work to make a role play

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is role playing?: A role play is acting a story line in your head and have adventure

What is metagaming?: metagaming when you yous idea that your role play won't have.

What is Powergaming?: what power gaming is  make a character to be the best image in your head.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Jack Fisher

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: human

Character’s age:20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Jack was born with in a small village called Charleston he had two older brothers the oldest was name was Raven fisher he was the one who always took care of the family buy hunting he was very handsome he get from our father Fry fisher  fry always told story on his adventure around the world that why jack love him some much just want to be like his old man now the 2 oldest was Jackson he was the quiet one he always stay in his room reading book or writing books that why the mother love him the mother was name Jasmine Fisher she was like Jackson readying book and staying inside she had great life as the Fisher's  mom but she pass away like a long time ago and the still go to her grave a lot Jack did not know much about his mother his father said jack looks just like her the blue eyes and blond hair  he want to be a knight but he also want to sail the world like his father that been in his head at the age of 18 for a long time but at the age of 20 he became a knight and protecting anyone in need

Ambitions: have a great family and sail the world and become a knight

Strengths/Talents: he is very strong Jack talents are he know if someone is lying by looking at him

Weaknesses/Inabilities: he is not so good with bows Jack weaknesses is swords and daggers

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): he have blue eyes blond hair his height 5.6  he have a green moss on his back

Edited November 9, 2015 by nightreper1

[Fireheart 2777]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed. I am overall hesitant to deny an application like this, but after reviewing it I can see there is a bit of work to be done before this application can be accepted. I will treat the main sections of the application as I would if I were to place it on pending. This way you can make your edits and re-apply with a sufficient application next time around.

 

Your definition of Roleplay is vague, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Your definition of Metagaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Please lengthen your Biography out to make it longer. I am looking for around the size of two well sized paragraphs. You can incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character.

 

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

 

Please provide a picture of your Character’s skin so I can review it.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

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