application [Denied] White List Application

[twsister2361 49]

What is roleplaying?

Having a character (original or otherwise) that you feel strongly about to the point of acting like that character in a controlled environment such as a server or a convention.

 What is metagaming?

Using information outside the knowledge of the character you are acting as

What is powergaming?

Trying to control the actions of another player in order to get what you want

My information

Minecraft name: twsister2361

Age: 17

I am aware of the pg-13 rating

I have read and agreed to the rules

The rule of powergaming is the one I agree with most

I have none

My friend has been addicted to it

In-Character Information

Character name: Casca

Character sex: female

Character race:  elf, wood

Biography: Long ago I had a family. A father and mother, and also an older sister. However; while I was still young a group of raiders attacked my home and most of my family was killed. I was separated from my older sister Dianna and taken by the raiders to be sold into slavery. They had a camp in Thales that I stayed at for a week, until I was able to escape into the forest.

For many years I have lived in the forest, making friends with the animals and the plants. Ever sense my escape I have not had a single pleasant interaction with any of the races. Including my own. I had planned to continue living this way, but the trees have told me of another elf, my sister Dianna. They want me to find her, for I need her guidance. So I have traveled to Vailor in search of her.

Personality Traits: I am untrusting when I comes to others. It comes with living alone in the forest for most of my life. I also have a habit of wandering off and getting into trouble, a trait that I most likely got from my parents. Sense I have had a lack of raising for most of my life, the way I speak was self-taught. I often come up with my own words for things and pronounce things in a strange way. I have a hearted of those I call “Khan-eh” which I clam means ‘City Brutes’ In the language of trees. I have one of the strongest connections with the forest and often spit on the so called Druids for their petty attempts at making the trees their friends. Strangely, I tend to be over emotional at the death of an animal or plaint, but I’m indifferent when it comes to the death of another intelligent being.

Ambitions: I wish to one day find a place far away from any city or town where I can raise a family with a fellow nature enthusiast. I fear however that I will never find anther that shows the forest my accepted amount of respect. I also have the goal that the trees gave me, that is to find my sister and learn from her.

Strengths/ talents: I have a strong connection to the forest. So much so that I claim to talk to trees. I am also handy with a bow and a knife, but I am not the best. Years of climbing trees has made me agile and fast. I am also good at sneaking.

Weaknesses/ Inabilities: I find it really hard to get along with other people from my lack of communication skills. I can’t talk properly because I was taught by the trees how to speak. Though I know how to use weapons, I am not strong and would not win in a confrontation if I did not have the advantage of surprise.

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[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-Your application's format is very muddled and unspaced, as your definitions are up top- not under the personal information, and you've seemed to have not included your character's age, and appearence description.

 

-You need to expand upon your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions.

 

-Your character's biography is a fair bit too short.

 

-Whats... language of the trees? Trees cannot teach anyone language, as such your character cant be taught anything by trees.

 

-You need to balance your character's strengths and weaknesses.

 

-Druids actually do... talk to, and have easilly the most in-depth relationships with nature.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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