[Denied] lordsheen application 2

[lordsheen 4]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

#1rst application: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/136651-denied-lordsheen-application/

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: lordsheen

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I do not know, I do not differentiate between objects of the same kind.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friend always plays it

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: when people act out roles to create a story

What is metagaming?: when someone presents information through their character when their character hasn't acquired that information

What is powergaming?: when someone does multiple actions or simply does something that would give them an immense advantage in a roleplay

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Unknown Wizard

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: High Elf

Character’s age: 497

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Jerry "Unknown Wizard" Pipes was born on the 15th of The Amber Cold in the year 1066. Both of his parents were powerful wizards. When he was born, he with born with a God Toe. The God Toe is a magical toe that is resonating with a white color and sends out powerful impulses of energy. It was highly prophesied about, but there was no evidence to support its existence until he was born. It was the 6th toe on his left foot. His entire body except for that toe was invisible when he was conceived. His parents used their powerful magic to remove the toe from his body, and then he turned visible, but the chromosomes from the God Toe have infected his body, so he has been the most powerful wizard ever since his birth. Without its host, the God Toe has extinguished its own existence. 

When Unknown Wizard was 7 years old, he has learned many things about machinery and mechanisms. He has learned how to construct golems by observing a dwarf with his clairvoyance. By the time he was 9 years old, he has gained much knowledge regarding the anatomy of many species. With his vast knowledge, he has created a potion that can temporarily allow the user to regain some youth. The potion is highly addiction, but presents virtually no negative consequence. He has used his potion a countless number of times, and it is his most notable creation. He has recently emerged from a portal in a dark, gloomy cave located near Caliphate. With his clairvoyance, he was easily able to pinpoint the location of a city named Felsen, then he erased its existence simply because he disliked the people living there. He has learned of the human's ability to create new technologies (such as the bow), and he has an army of over 50 million golems waiting on the other side of a portal. With the golems, he intends to create a crisis for the humans to overcome. If the humans overcome the crisis, then that will present Unknown Wizard with new technologies created by the humans.

Personality Traits: Enjoys learning and creating situations that will benefit him

Ambitions: To learn, gain intelligence

Strengths/Talents: Proficient at acquiring the knowledge that he desires, has mastered many different uses of magic.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not omnipotent or omnipresent. He can't gain knowledge from the past or future, only from the present. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 9 feet tall, skinny, weightless, always wears a wizard robe.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

Edited November 17, 2015 by lordsheen

[Pureimp10 5691]

 

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

Your character can not have any form of training or understanding of basic concepts of magic. Your character must learn that once you are whitelisted on the server! Please make the proper revisions so that they follow under the guidelines of the request.

 

You cannot make up devices or stories, or change the lore of the server to fit your character. Please use the lore given to you by our wiki to include in your biography.

[Pureimp10 5691]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.