[Denied] [Pending] lordsheen application 3

[lordsheen 4]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

#1st application: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/136651-denied-lordsheen-application/

#2nd application: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/136701-denied-lordsheen-application-2/

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: lordsheen

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I do not know, I do not differentiate between objects of the same kind.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friend always plays it

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: when people act out roles to create a story

What is metagaming?: when someone presents information through their character when their character hasn't acquired that information

What is powergaming?: when someone does multiple actions or simply does something that would give them an immense advantage in a roleplay

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Elias Winny

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 43

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Elias Winny was an ordinarily man who has been raised properly by his loving parents. He has the average 10 fingers and 10 toes on his body. He has two ears, two eyes, and a mouth! The cartilage in his nose is quite average. He has a nice looking beard with hair that goes well with it. All of his shirts only contain one color on them. He always wears jeans and black shoes. Winny has a loving wife and two children. He is a good father. He has brown eyes. He is a farmer and he makes more than enough money to support his family. He works on someone else's farm.

Personality Traits: Enjoys interacting with his family and doing the dishes. he lives in Caliphate. 

Ambitions: To get a promotion at work

Strengths/Talents: Good at using the hoe and is a good family man

Weaknesses/Inabilities: he can't fight very well

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5'8 tall, 210 pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

Edited November 18, 2015 by lordsheen

[Lego XBOX 915]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed it on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below. You have twenty four (24) hours to make these changes, message me if you have any questions or concerns. Failing to fulfill the requested changes will result in this application being denied. By being denied you will have to wait 24 hours before re-applying with the proper changes in place.

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for humans can be found on the Wiki ( http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events. And, jeans aren't a thing in a medieval server.

Please fill in your personality traits (~3) -- these are not physical attributes or skills.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

Applicant failed to make (all) requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.