[Denied] [Pending] Member Application - NewHat

[NewHat 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: NewHat

How old are you?: I am 15 years old.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am aware that this server is PG-13.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule that I most confidently agree with the most would have to be the rule where a player is required to stay in roleplay context at all times.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I think I have a pretty good understanding on all the rules at this time.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was browsing the web for  roleplay type minecraft server when I stumbled upon this server.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you act out a certain character and that characters roles.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you use some kind of source that is not in the game to better advantage yourself.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when you attempt to quickly progress an action of roleplay.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:  Biarid Gwoikia

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: White

Character’s age: 23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Biardid is a 23 year old male warrior who grew up in a small town called crique where the people would right for reputation and respect. Biarid quickly found passion in this hobby and began training, he dropped out of his education system and put his focus directly into the works of fighting. After about two years of training Biarid began quite good but was halted in his progress from the passing of his father. Biarid was put into a great deal of sadness and lost his lust for fighting until one night his small town was getting raided, Biarid not sure what to do began cowarding, after the raid had been going on without barely any recognition or courage from the citizens Biarid sprung into action ut was quickly shut down by the intruders. After the attack Biarid was very disappointed at how he preformed and he began thinking that he had let his father down by not stopping the intruders. After about 2 weeks of deep depression Biarid decided to take a walk on the street and observe the damage from just a few weeks ago. During his walk Biarid saw a flyer on the ground that read "The Lord Of Craft: Where true fighters are made", this caught the attention of Biarid and so he read the flyer and decided he was going to attend The Lord Of Craft, not for himself, not for the people of his town, but for his father. 

Personality Traits: Biarid a very dedicated warrior who likes a challenge but hates listening to authority.

Ambitions: 

Strengths/Talents: Fighting is a strength for Biarid

Weaknesses/Inabilities: A weakness for Biarid is his defense.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Biarid is a 23 year old male who weighs approximately 185 lbs and stands tall at 6'1

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): https://gyazo.com/43ddafbf7a83eb37e97854c202e200eb

[Lego XBOX 915]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed it on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below. You have twenty four (24) hours to make these changes, message me if you have any questions or concerns. Failing to fulfill the requested changes will result in this application being denied. By being denied you will have to wait 24 hours before re-applying with the proper changes in place.

Your definition of Metagaming is vague, please refer to http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying for guidance.

Please fill in your character's race as one of the approved races (Human/Elf/Orc/Dwarf/Halfling).

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for humans can be found on the Wiki ( http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.

Please lengthen your Biography out to a longer length. I am looking for around the size of two paragraphs. As an idea incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character’s development to their current standpoint.

Please fill in your ambitions realistically.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

Applicant failed to make all requested edits to the application within the given 24 hour period.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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