[Denied]SComan987 5th idea application:/

[scoman987 0]

-Minecraft Account Name:

scoman987

-How old are you?:

15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

USA, Mountian Standard Time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am very creative, and love to build. I have a bad temper at some times, yet I will try my best.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

around 3-5 hours a day.

-How long have you played minecraft?:

I have been playing since 1.2_2 alpha, so I am a very expereinced player.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it?

I know that roleplaying is a fun, and I have been roleplaying in other games, but never in minecraft, I cant wait!

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

Very enjoyable, and a new experience.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

.interitus

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

Yes

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Dwarves, Humans, Orcs, and Elves

-How did you hear about us?:

My friends play.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

scoman987

In-Character:

-Character Name:

skyler

-What is your Race?:

Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

scoman987

-Biography:

Skyler urns to create, and build. He has a wonderful mind, he understand some of the most complicated machines.Through out his life he has seen horrible things, he has fought orcs and defended kingdoms.

When he was a boy he struggled with others, not very social. So he ran away as a boy, it wasn't hard, seeing as he was raised by a nanny and never knew his mother and father. His father was a merchant when they were traveling by boat for trading with the neighboring kingdom. When they were raided by horrid pirate, which he does not know to this day, he killed his parents and all the other crew mates, but one, that one saved Skyler.

When he and the survivor washed up on the beach of the Rylin Kingdom, the boys savior passed away. As Queen Rylin walked along the beach, she found the small child and took him as her own, for she could not have children for unknown reasons... He was raised up under the Blue Rylin military, though he was found by the Queen he was not pampered. Under strict conditions he grew older. Until now, he decides to start on his own.

-Character Age:

25

-Character Appearance:

Tall, hazel eyes, and wears his blue unifrom.

-Character Personality:

Smart, and agile, and an able hunter.

-Your ambitions:

To become a wealthy, and to help others become stronger and smart.

-Can your character read or write?:

yes

-Can your character mine?:

yes, he likes to spalunk rather than shaft mining.

-Are you a capable builder?

yes, I love building things

-Can you wield a sword?:

yes, but I'd rather wield a bow though

-Enjoy Farming?:

sort of, but not my first choice

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

He makes wonderous creations and is a great fighter.

-A screenshot of your skin:

It is in the attachment.

-Other Information:

None

[Neri 3590]

It's pretty good, but here's a few tips to improve it.

1. Fix the attachment, there's nothing there. Either that or post a ACTUAL screenshot of your skin.

2. Bold or underline the App questions. it makes it easier to read and find what the Mod wants.

3. Proof-reading will help you remove any glaring errors or spelling mistakes.

Good luck getting approved!

[scoman987 0]

Thank you so much! I hope I get approved:/

[NairOG 1]

There is a search option you know. CorprlSkyler application

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been.

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Also, do NOT contact me in order to view your new application.

[scoman987 0]

Well what do you want me to do Ive done four already JESUS I dont know what to say because im really aggravated. Can you take ONE more look at the assassin one please I thought it was good Please!!!!!!!!!!

[Neri 3590]

Well what do you want me to do Ive done four already JESUS I dont know what to say because im really aggravated. Can you take ONE more look at the assassin one please I thought it was good Please!!!!!!!!!!

Your application has to be YOUR work. Only you can do the work to improve it.

Nair does a great job, but dont push him, please.

[scoman987 0]

freya can you help me I tryed but failed 4 times.....

[NairOG 1]

1st is bad.

2nd is bad.

3rd is bad. Same character motives as of many other characters.

4th is a copy.

You will have to prove yourself. Do not take this as insult.

[scoman987 0]

Ok, I will..