[Denied] [Pending] draconi's application

[Draconi 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: missouri123

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The no cyber bullying rule

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no I under stand all of them

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft I had heard of it for a couple of weeks the decided to log onto the server where I was told to come to the web site

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is role playing?: Role playing is when as you play you take on the role of a certain character usually made by you

What is metagaming?: This is when you use knowledge in a role playing  game that your character wouldn’t normally have

What is powergaming?: When you build a character for a specific function

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Ja'Hyou

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Kharajyr  Kha'Pantera

Character’s age: 19

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 Ja'Hyou love his home on Ohlokhar but one thing he hated was the sacrifices that his people believed in. Ja'Hyou as he grew up was an out cast he looked and talked the same way as the other cubs but he had more of a sympathy toward the descendent races. His whole family had been Kha'Pantera even he had the dark coat of fur. Ja'Hyou was about 18 when trouble had come to his family. His mother was selected for sacrifice.

 He ran toward his mother as the priests took her toward the alter just to be met by a sharp pain in his arm one of the guards had thrust his dagger into his arm.  Just as he recovered from the strike  he heard a slice and a thump then he saw his mother lying in a pool of blood on the ground. He was shocked at fist then just realized what happened he then took out his only dagger and used the tip into the guard and ran he ran until he got to the sea and jumped then it all went black as he woke up he noticed that he was many miles from Ohlokhar and he kept running and went strait for the first familiar thing the trees

Personality Traits: smart but sarcastic not extremely strong but has some muscle

Ambitions: he wishes to kill the priests that helped killed his mother

Strengths/Talents: can be quiet and stealthy he can sneak up on most of the animals on Ohlokhar

Weaknesses/Inabilities: his left arm was damaged on Ohlokhar

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): skinny but strong with a scar on his arm that has long since grown hair over the scar

                 Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Lego XBOX 915]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed it on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below. You have twenty four (24) hours to make these changes, message me if you have any questions or concerns. Failing to fulfill the requested changes will result in this application being denied. By being denied you will have to wait 24 hours before re-applying with the proper changes in place.

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying for guidance.

Please include Server Lore into your application. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events. The problem with what you have now is the Olohkar is a town from the previous world Athera. That's fine if your character is old enough, but we are now in a new world. Check this out and add a bit more lore to the application.

Please fill in your personality traits (~3) -- these are not physical attributes or skills.

Please upload or link your skin to the application.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

Applicant failed to make all requested edits to the application within the given 24 hour period.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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