[Denied] [Pending]Character Apllication / Whitelist Application (Redo)

[xxusagigxx 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: xxusagigxxx

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule where anything that breaks the laws of physics are not allowed such as: Floating castles.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was looking for a rp server to play on. so i went on YouTube and found a playlist of Lord of the Craft.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Role Playing the act of adopting your avatar's personality in game

What is metagaming?: Using outside information to improve your in-game performance. 

What is powergaming?: Playing the for a single goal while not caring about the Lore.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Amane Tetsu

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 22

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Amane Tetsu was born in 1506 in the Reformed Kingdom of Oren. It was in 1518 his father died as he was conscripted into The Duke's War and was slain during the civil war. In his village all men able bodied or not was conscripted into the Duke's War. This left the village to die off slowly as no one worked the fields or maintained the buildings and it was at this point a group deserters befell onto the small village. This led to the killing and and capture of almost all of the last remaining people who were most likely sold into slavery. Amane escaped as his mother fended them off for the few precious seconds for the deserters lose track of where Amane went.

After years of resentment he found one of his mother's killers and wanted to kill them but decided to inform the guard of a local town of their position. He claim the bounty and watched as all of the men were executed and with this bounty he bought his knighthood in Oren. With this knighthood he could buy his own village and protect it so that no tragedy  like the one when he was a teenager could repeat. But decided not to do this because he had bigger ambitions he did not want to rule over a tiny village. No. He wanted to rule a nation so that he Immortalized in history until the End Times. 

Personality Traits: Clam, easy to anger and joyful

Ambitions: To make his own Kingdom and be Immortalized to the future generations

Strengths/Talents: Strong willed, inspiring and a born Leader.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Stubborn and refuses to back down even against the odds.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6 ft  2 inches

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

Edited December 8, 2015 by xxusagigxx

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

This app needs improvements:

• "The rule" is not a viable answer to the question "What’s the rule you agree with the most?"
• Your definitions are vague. Would you kindly expand them a bit more?
• Your app is outdated. Al'Khazar was a city in Aegis, but we are currently in Vailor. Please update it with the lore found here. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor
• Your app also contains very little lore and looks like a clique. Use the link above to add more to you biography. Tell more about the place you lived, your loved ones, the people you met on your journeys!
• Your ambition is also pretty clique. Please add more to it.

You have 24 hours to make these changes. Once you're done, message me. Feel free to contact me or any other AT for help!

[Crowbill 493]

You have been denied for following reasons.

• Applicant failed to make changes in the given period.

You may re-apply in 24 hours. Contact me or any other AT member if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.