[Denied] [Pending] Application 2 (LeoRabbit99)

[LeoRabbit 3]

 

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: LeoRabbit99
How old are you?: 16
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You cannot be too OP
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Youtube

 

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: The act of immersing one's self into another character (Real or Fake).
What is metagaming?: The act of using outside knowledge from the real world in a game to gain an unfair advantage. 
What is powergaming?: The act of doing something in the game that is automatically successful without giving the other player a chance to respond which is unfair. 

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Giles
Character’s sex: Male
Character’s race: Half Human, Half Wood-Elf
Character’s age: 23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
    

   Giles's past is a dreadful story that involves hardship from the moment he was created inside his mother womb. It all started when his wood-elvish mother was first pregnant with him.
    When he was in the womb of his mother, a shade seeped into the mother and possessed the poor child. His human father eventually found out and sought for help. He found a powerful priest who was able to rid the shade possessing Giles. He preformed the ritual that would cleanse Giles's soul however it did not go according to plan. He was purged of the shade but an echo of it's presence lived on in Giles's body changing his personality. During labor, his mother died but he lived. The father fell into a deep state of depression and for all Giles's early life, blamed his son for the death of his wife. Eventually, Giles ran away because of the guilt his father put him through but was found by a human slave trader. For years Giles was put to work until he was bought by another human slave trader who put Giles into children fighting rings for people's entertainment. He quickly learned the ways of battle becoming a skilled bowman. He was a cunning fighter who lacked in strength but used his agility to his advantage. He then became to old to fight at 13 in the children arenas and was put into a human orphanage in the Kingdom of Kaedrin. He faced a troublesome life there where he not only faced physical and emotional abuse among the "Care Takers", but also faced racism from the other orphans due to his half elvish side because Kaedrin was a city with lots of members in the Order of the White Rose. He was beaten over and over again even though he always fought back. One day however, he got the upper hand and killed another orphan with a rock. The moment he did that, he once again ran away and never looked back. After that he made a living for himself by stealing food and living on the streets, barley surviving.

   After years of living like this, at age 17 he eventually became sick of this life style, and wanted to make a difference in the world so he left his human ancestry behind and traveled to Elandriel in the wood-elf lands but was rejected for being a half-human. He then ventured off in anger, trying to find a place for himself. He then found his old house he used to live in when he was a young child. There he saw his father, dying of old age, and his mother's grave which had an amulet wrapped around it around it. His father started to rage, and through chairs out him yelling at him to get out. Giles looked down in despair, grabbed the amulet to remember his old life by, and left. Now, he adventures the world showing evil no mercy seeking to purge the world of evil to ensure no one goes through a life like his.

 

Personality Traits: Secretive, Dedicated, Sinister to the Evil
Ambitions: To purge the world of corruption
Strengths/Talents: Archery, Agile, Sneaky
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Under-Average Strength
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):
130LB
5' 10'
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

Edited December 16, 2015 by Wells

[CheekyNolan 5420]

• Your definition of powergaming is on the right tracks however not entirely correct at this point, please fix this.
• The Dark Elves are not enemies of the Wood Elves and they in fact side by side, please fix this.
• Please add more lore to your application, a minimum of free is what is deemed acceptable. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• Your character cannot know magic prior to you actually roleplaying, please remove this.
• Your weaknesses seem odd and don't entirely make sense, for example how can one be weak to a bard's abilities. Please put something more fitting.

You have 24 hours to make the following changes. If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

[WuHanXianShi14 0]

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