[Denied] [Pending]Whitelist appl.

[mazzybananas 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: mazzybananas

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no impersonating another player

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no, they where all clear :)

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Google :P

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:The act of creating a fictional character and playing as that character, typically with traits somewhat similar to your own. Or creating a fantasy life you cant physically live

What is metagaming?: outside knowledge used to help you in game

What is powergaming?: playing a game towards a goal (Like a final boss, achievement, etc)

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Sonali Rivera

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race:High Elf

Character’s age: 55

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Born to two high elves in Silver city, Sonali grew up with street smarts from running off so much. She never had difficulty in school until it came to her making friends. She was very stubborn and never let anyone tell her what to do, but she never did the wrong thing. She would run away and play in the woods and make friends with deer and wolves. This was when she found a cave, after spending several days in the forest, where she found an elderly dark elf, living alone. The dark elf was very kind, unlike what her parents had told her about the race, and told her stories about her youth. She had then told  Sonali about how she always had wanted to travel the world, but her age was stopping her from doing so (She was nearly 1000 years old). From that day on, sonali had always wanted to travel. She continued to visit back with the elf until she passed away naturally, and that was around the time sonali hit adulthood. So she packed her things and left her family, traveling from place to place in search for her passion and goal in life. She picks up bar keeping and inn jobs from the places she goes to earn her traveling money.

Personality Traits: Tough, intimidating, but inside a very sweet person. Likes swords. Fascinated by dark elves

Ambitions:not sure, she just became an adult recently and is wanting to travel and find her passion.

Strengths/Talents: Swordsmanship, agility, endurance, speech

Weaknesses/Inabilities: taking on multiple people, taller people, bow and arrows

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): roughly 5'7" muscular frame, dyed hair, doesnt like to look like other elves of her kind

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere): (Device wont screenshot, but here is the template.)

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

Good job on the app! However some changes need to be made:

• Your defintions are vague. Please expand on them. Feel free to consult our wiki page about roleplaying here! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying
• Could you please add more lore into your application? Feel free to use our wiki about our current Realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• One part of your app doesn't really make sense. Elves don't age at all, so that old person wouldn't matter if she's 1000 or 500 years old. After all, having 1000 years just boosts her social status, not cripple her. Could you work on that part of the story a bit mroe.
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Please add more to them.

You have 24 hours to make your changes. Once finished, message me. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• Applicant failed to make needed changes in the set time period.

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 12 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.