[Denied] [Pending]My White List Application

[Elrohier 0]

Dear Staff at Lord of the Craft,
I am very interested in applying for your server; I've always loved roleplaying and I've spent most of my Skyrim gameplay experience doing so. (As a wood-elf huntress)
 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: KingHarry_xii

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule that I most strongly agree with, of course, is the fact that cyber bullying will not be tolerated; not only do I agree with this the most but I also firmly believe that it is the most important because bullying can destroy people's lives. (As I'm sure you are aware.­)

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

I found out about this server via my older brother, William, he used to play some time ago and recommended it to me.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: To my knowledge, roleplaying is stepping into a character's shoes... To roleplay, one must adapt to a new behaviour to assume a certain role or character. This is done for the enjoyment of the player.

What is metagaming?:Using information I have gathered from researching on Google, I have found out that metagaming is when the player uses knowledge or information (known by the player) that is supposedly unknown to the character to perform an action. This is usually frowned upon in roleplaying games.

What is powergaming?:When the actions of one player is forced on another player without giving the other player chance to act. For example, 'Steven steals Harry's coin purse from his belt' should actually be 'Steven attempts to steal Harry's coin purse by reaching for his belt'.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Elrohier Miriel

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Wood Elf

Character’s age: 68

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Elrohier grew up in a very small secluded village in the Northern Mountains of Athera with his father, Folred Miriel. His mother died during childbirth, she was a gentle woman with good ethics and reputation. Elrohier and his father developed a strong bond because of this, Flored would always tell stories of him and Elrohier's mother seeing each other secretly; they used to do this because she was from a rich family, one that would disapprove of Folred. Folred was perhaps the greatest hunter the village had ever seen, he could work a bow like magic and knew all of the tricks of hunting. Naturally, he taught his son how to shoot and track deer at a very early age. After every hunt, Folred would burn the unusable remains of his kill and scatter the ashes across the hunting grounds, he said this was his was of 'trading' with Mother Nature.
During his adolescence, Elrohier grew tired of his village, he always wondered what was behind the mountains. As soon as he was allowed, he left home at the age of 40, he had perhaps become a greater archer than his father. The first place he visited was the Primora Jungle, he had never made a greater mistake in his life. From the very first night he felt uneasy, as if something was watching him. Elrohier got very little sleep that night... The next day he left, having felt so uncomfortable; he had soon found a nearby city by the name of Rivel. It was unimaginably large, he had never seen anything like it. He was eager to enter and meet people who weren't from his village. As he walked through the great gates, he felt eyes upon him immediately, the gaze of the citizens was so heavy it felt like he was carrying a pack full of stone. Straight away he looked for an inn, after trotting shamefully through the grey street whilst dealing with the disdainful attitude of the people, he found a place. It was grand, amazing. He entered and went to the bar.

"Just some water please."

"We don't serve outsiders, you see that place across the street?" The bar tender, a tall high-elf, gestured to a small dilapidated tavern "Go there."

Elrohier was confused, why didn't anyone like him? Slowly, the elf rambled across the street and entered the tavern. Upon entry he heard a voice.

"Another reject, eh?" The voice came from a human, a lot taller than Elrohier. "You can stay here, but leave at dawn"

This man explained to Elrohier why they did not accept him, these people were here to learn magic, they didn't approve of Elrohier because he was lower-class... Elrohier was served some bread and water. From this point on, he kept himself to himself; he could not relive the torment of visiting Rivel.

 He'd seen the whole province within a few years; he met so many people, although still none of them he could get along with. He was happy being alone, he felt free.

After 10 years of travelling, he returned to his village only to find the ashes of what he once called home. No trace of his father. The only thing he did find was a half broken war-axe; it was of Orcish make...
 

Personality Traits: Diligent, Intelligent, Charismatic, Nimble

Ambitions: Find the orcs who killed his father and kill them by any means possible

Strengths/Talents:  He excels at most forms of combat, be it hand-to-hand, armed with a sword or archery. He is a very good problem solver and thinks very logically. 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:  He is fickle and impatient and he is not very loyal. He has poor social skill, dislikes most others. Though nimble, he lacks strength. He was never strong throughout his whole life.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Covers bottom half of his face with a shemagh, Unusually short (even for a wood elf: about 4'11"), Skinny, Pale Green Eyes, Dark Skin and Hair (as to be expected from a wood elf)

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):

 

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

Good job on the application! However, some changes need to be made:

• Your powergaming definition is not fully correct. Please expand on it. Feel free to consult our wiki page about roleplaying here! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying
• Except the mentioning of Athera, no other lore is used. Your app also lacks newer server lore. Please add more to it. Feel free to use our wiki about our current realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• Your biography is quite dry. Could you add one more paragraph about your journeys and the events that happened to you?
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Please add more to your weaknesses.

You have 24 hours to make your changes. Once finished, message me. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

 

 

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• Applicant failed to make needed changes in the set time period.

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 12 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.