[Denied] Application V2.

[Furbola 3]

A kind hearted fellow had messaged me saying that my first application didn't follow the format. He sent me a link to it and here is my New and Improved Application.

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Furbola

How old are you?: 12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware of that. My parents are notified. 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes. They are quite confusing! But, I think I got the basis of it.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The Lock Picking situation. It makes it so that lock picking is OP.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I have a lot of questions! If I am in one region, can I visit the other?  Can you be an Anti-Hero because, that's what I'm trying to aim for with my character. Like he can lock break but, not lock pick. And no doing Villainous Deeds on the daily unless someone paid me to do it. 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

I got bored of playing Mineplex and Hypixel all day. I wanted to actually interact and sort of make my own spot in a RP community. I searched up on YT good RP servers. I saw Lord of the Craft pop up. I was kind of freaking out considering I love LOTR.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: A sketch or movie that is solely based on improvising and is usually in a Mythical or Fiction world.

What is metagaming?: Pretty much find loop-holes within the game/rules for benefit.

What is powergaming?: To be story-driven and to try your best to end your journey.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Bine

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age: 31

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

1 As a child he was beaten by his dad. His brother hated him and his mother was the nicest person in the world. He loved his mom more than anything. One night, his father was drunk. He was yelling at his mum. The Father broke his Vodka Bottle and stabbed her with a shard. Bine grabbed a shard and then stabbed his father in the back. In a panic the father threw him off of his back. His brother caught him. Bine was furious. He yellled "BAEKRUN{father} YOU F*%&#%* COWARD DON'T TOUCH MY MUM LIKE THAT YOU ARSE" His father got up. and fell down. As he was drunk, he couldn't see 2 steps in front of him. He tripped and his head landed on a shard. Bine rushed to his dying mother. Her last word were "Don't do nothing. Be something. Be someone. Not that man though, Heh" Bine was crying. His Brother, Xenon had taken him in. Xenon learned to care for his own brother. He taught Bine how to shoot a Bow and Arrow. Also the forests around Malinor. Bine knew every single tree and where they were. He named the shortest Rozetta. His mom's name. A few years later Bine was around 14. His brother messed with the wrong people. At their treehouse, a box was sent. Xenon's head. Bine spent just about the rest of his Youth hunting elk and squirrels. Then sold them at Malinor's market. He didn't want to do this though. He saved up enough money and went to Alchemy School. His father was indeed a High Elf. While his mother was a Wood Elf. He got his looks and most strengths from his mother. But, he was wanted to tinker within Alchemy. At age of 31, his schooling is over. Now trying to create a hospital within Malinor to save people, he still lives in that treehouse. He is still 31 and, he feels something. He doesn't know. Yet.

Personality Traits: Intelligent, Outcast, Dead-Eye, Quiet, and Patient.

Ambitions: To accomplish what his mother wanted him to do.

Strengths/Talents: He gets almost everything from his Parents this is what he doesn't get.

He doesn't get any extra StoneMason or Enchanting

No Bathe In Gold ability.

No extra Breeder either.

And no extra Leather Worker skill.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

-20% Miner.

He is depressed so that makes him unable to smile

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Height: he is 4 "6

Weight: He is about 135.7 lbs.

{I have no idea what else to put XD}

 

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:
How old are you?:
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?:
What is metagaming?:
What is powergaming?:
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name:
Character’s sex:
Character’s race:
Character’s age:
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
Personality Traits:
Ambitions:
Strengths/Talents:
Weaknesses/Inabilities:
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here)

I hope you enjoyed reading my little story. I hope you will accept me to join this server!

 

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Admin | Ex-AT Lead | Ex- FM | Ex-MT Lead

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-The mechanical advantages and disadvantages are not for the strength and weaknesses section. They should be RP based talents or weaknesses.

-Your character is too young to have been born in Malinor. Malinor has disbanded quite some time ago. Please fix your age or change that location.

-Your definitions are incorrect, please fix them.

-Please include more lore within your biography.

 

As to the question you asked, yes you can be an anti-hero.

 

If you have any questions feel free to PM me.

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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