application [Denied] Garrett Prower (Gmonayy's Application)

[Gmonayy 2]

~~~Garrett Prower~~~
Minecraft Account Name:Gmonayy
How old are you:14
Are you aware the server is PG-13:Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules:Yes
What's the rule you agree with most?:No power gaming
Any rules that confuse you?:Nope
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft:A friend
What is roleplaying?: Roleplay is like playing if it was real life.
What is metagaming?: Meta-Gaming is kinda like knowing stuff that your character doesn't know but you do and you use as a advantage.
What is powergaming?: Powergaming usually RolePlay's things which is impossible to do and the other player doesn't 
Character's name:Garrett Prower
Character's sex:Male
Character's race:Human
Characters age:22
Biography:Garrett Prower was always interested into swordsmanship, as his father once did, his father a sword forger, Made Garrett; his first sword.... As Garrett grew up he knew that he had to protect his family, and once the time came, Garrett became very skillful in his ability with blades, Their city, the city of Kal'Akash was destroyed... Unluckily Garrett had gone out to venture and train his swordsmanship, once Garrett returned to the village it was pillaged and destroyed in all of its entirety.. He then decided to search around the village for numerous years and came across Archy and Revontheus (CJMelvin & CrypticWalker), Once they all talked among each other and formed their brethren as they each had a goal in common, to prove to their families that they can accomplish what was once set out for them but never acquired as they ventured on-wards into the realm, their goal needed to be accomplished for the sake of their family. Garrett and his new brethren now venture on-wards across the realm of Vailor outwards to other realms to search for their peace and accomplishment done for their families...
Personality Traits:Protective, Quick-Tempered
Ambitions:To protect brethren
Strengths/Talents:Athletic, Swordsmanship, Forging(Ability)
Weaknesses/Inabilities:Quick to judge, Overprotective, Non-Trusting, Angry
Apperance:Red haired, Brown shirt, Casual pants, (Optifine cape; Black and red) 6ft 7inches 225lb [Strong to wield sword]

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-Your powergaming definition is plagiarized. Plagiarizing is a seriously offense upon Lord of the Craft, and continuing to do so will result in an application ban.

-More lore is needed within your biography.

-The skin you linked has large ears, appearing to be an elven skin.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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