[Denied] Application!

[Janis_Miriam 6]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Bookwyrm2003

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The no OOG Racism

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No I don't

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I wanted to play a role-play server and I found this one.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Pretending to be someone you are not and exploring things you would not normally be allowed to do.

What is metagaming?: Using out of game information in game.

What is power gaming?: making an op character or using mods to enhance your characters performance.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Alyss Carnage.

Character’s sex: Female.

Character’s race: Highlander.

Character’s age: 20.

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): My character was born far in the north of the Holy Orenian Empire.. She lived on a farm until she was 10. One day a bandit group attacked her parents small farm and destroyed it. Her parents were carried away to be sold as slaves and Alyss was left for dead. When she woke up everything was ruined. The house was on fire and the crops had all been destroyed. Alyss salvage some food from the remains and started to travel. She became a Musician playing for coins in the marketplaces. She is always searching for her parents.

Personality Traits: Funny, Stubborn

Ambitions: Find her parents, Somehow make a Anti bandit service, Become a doctor,

Strengths/Talents: Farming, playing instruments, being smart

Weaknesses/Inabilities: not very strong, has to help everyone no matter if it is obviously a trap, Makes stupid jokes sometimes.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): green eyes, light brown hair, 5.5 feet tall, 150 lbs,

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here)

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons. Don't get disturbed, this just means you just need to work a bit more. The following changes need to be made:

• Your metagaming is vague. Please expand on it. Feel free to consult our wiki page about roleplaying here! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying
• Your powergaming defintion is not fully correct. Please work on it.
• Your current story seems like a cliche (the whole enslaved parents thing and a bandit raid), but I believe one more paragraph in your biography can fix that!
• Could you please add more lore into your application? Feel free to use our wiki about our current Realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• Your characters age does not match the place of your birth. You were born 20 years ago, but Holy Oren Empire existed 103 years ago!
• You shoul add more personality traits. This helps build our your character!
• Could you please add your skin?

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 12 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.