[Denied] [Pending]AsiSaiyan's Application

[AsiSaiyan 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: AsiSaiyan

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  excessive trolling or use of 'memes' in roleplay [is] disallowed because this negates the fact that it is a roleplay server

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? No, all of the rules are in order

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Searching for a good minecraft roleplay server and I came across this

 

What is roleplaying?: Each person has a role in the server's world. It is a community that has acting embedded in it

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is having an advantage over others as you are bringing outside roleplay assests into the action

What is powergaming?: In my eyes, powergaming is something all rp'ers should shoot for. It is putting your character through skill training. Strengthening the skills of the character is necessary as you can't advance otherwise.

 

Character’s name: Hazel

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: High Elf

Character’s age: 23

Biography: Hazel started out a simple life, out in Valkyria. Her parents both worked on their farm as she cooked and cleaned around the house for them. Every so often, her father would leave for unexpected reasons. She then found

 that when he left he paid a group of bandits in Seahelm to not steal his crops. When finding out, the bandits saw her and asked for more crops or else they would take Hazel. The father kindly obliged, but that didn't stop the bandits.... Hazel ran back towards the farmhouse and looked back and saw her father have multiple arrows in his back and chest. That night Hazel ran like she had never ran before. When she arrived at her house, her mother already knew what must have happened. It was only a short while until the bandits would come barging in. Hazel hid in between a wall her father had built long ago just for this reason. In the wall were various Blood Magic books, but she thought nothing of them. Hazel's mother was slaughtered, but put up a fight as she drained the life of two bandits and brought them back up as one of her own. In an instant they were killed because of an arrow shot right through her heart. Hazel couldn't believe her mother was a necromancer! In the kitchen the bandits were loose around the house looking for Hazel. They never checked the false wall. The night moved on and it was a new day. Hazel knew she had to leave her farm and all of her past. She decided to move to a new place, somewhere where she could be free and live a life worth living....somewhere like Sanctuary or the Realm of Aegis.

Personality Traits: efficient, hard-working, and resourceful

Ambitions: Striving to become a talented swordsman and blacksmith

Strengths/Talents: Fast learner, Brave, 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Dislikes teamwork, somewhat impatient but not all the time

Appearance: 5"7

Hair: Light Brown

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Weight: 136 lbs.

 

Edited February 16, 2016 by AsiSaiyan
pending application

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What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

-Please add server lore to you biography. This can be found on our wiki.

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[CheekyNolan 5420]

Denied

• Your powergaming definition is not entirely correct, please read up on it or even look at past accepted applications and make your own version of what it is.
• Blood Magic is a locked magic and normal people would not have those type of books lying around; please refrain from mentioning anything of the sort.
• Necromancy, a locked magic as well, and Blood Magic are entirely different branches of magic, again, please don't mention these.
• Your skin is not fitting for that of a High Elf, High Elves are generally pale and have light coloured hair (such as silver, white and blonde) and their eyes normally range from blue, green and, rarely, purple. Please change/find a skin accordingly.

You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any comments or questions, please feel free to PM Jax or I.

[CheekyNolan 5420]

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