[Denied] [Pending] My Whitelist Application

[G4Gaming 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: G4GamingX

How old are you?: 19

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Spamming on the server

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I am confused about the how I should be acting, is there any way I can be educated when I am on the server so I can learn the ropes?

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Through a Youtuber named GizzyGazza

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: To act out as someone else and not yourself as you roam In the life of you character

What is metagaming?: a transcendence in gaming where players have to stand by a certain ruleset or use external factors that alter the game itself.

What is powergaming?: a style of gaming which you can interact with other people or NPCs which helps with the progress of your goal in the game.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Lianna

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age: 50

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Lianna used to live in a forest village when she was only 12, some Orcs invaded the town and Lianna was the only survivor.  Since then her hatred for Orcs increased and wanted revenge.  She trained with some wandering heroes and she had to grow up very quickly to survive the life she has now taken as she swore to kill all Orcs for what they had done to her.  Lianna traveled with the heroes for 10 years until they retired in a local town where she trained with some guards who underestimate her for her young age, but she trained anyway under the teaching of the town's number 1 archer named Kylo giving her the talents of a great archer.

Kylowas a elf as well and understand her hatred for Orcs and trained her and was on her side for 27 years. until Kylo was assassinated by an Orc archer which only increased Lianna's hatred for them and for a year she survived in the wild on her own until she found an elvish town called Galahone where they welcomed her, and made her a guard and local hero where she stays in the present time, waiting for the opportunity to become a legend among the realm.

Personality Traits: Hot-headed, optimist, intelligent, and Brave

Ambitions: To Kill all Orcs and avenge her village and Kylo

Strengths/Talents: Good Archer,  lots of courage, and knows the woods, good at navigation

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Still training with a sword, gets angry too easily at the sight of a Orc

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Long Blond hair, wears a green tunic, blue eyes, 5'8 weighs 145 pounds has a shied on her back for defense

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): I can't apply a screenshot, but I can give you a link if that is okay? http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/link-as-a-girl--long-hair-/

[Corvoo 562]

Your application has been put on [PENDING]
 
What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

-I'd like you to be a bit more specific in your definitions for metagaming and powergaming. 

 

-Your character's biography has little to no server lore, please visit the wiki located at the link below to brush up on some our lore, then incorporate it into your bio.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

 

-Your biography has quite a few cliches. Such as being the only survivor of an Orcish raid. This sort of thing has been used very often in the past, and it would be best to use something else.

 
If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too. I'd be more than happy to help.
 
 
You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[Corvoo 562]

 

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

-Applicant did not update application, or contact me for a good reason why. Please heed my previous information when applying again.
 
Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.
 
 
You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[Corvoo 562]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.