[Denied] [Pending]_Neverland__ Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: _Neverland__

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Rule 3

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: No.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: The act of playing a role, that is not actually you.

What is metagaming?: So, Lets say my charas name is Hailey, this guy comes up, that you've never rped with and says "HEY HAILEY!" that's metagaming

What is powergaming?: Being too overpowered

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Miyu Helioah

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Dwarf

Character’s age: 18

Biography: Miyu is the fifth child out of  six in her family, they lived in a small village, but the Human race came and burnt down the village in jealousy of her clan. Her sisters are Myliah and Mishu and her brothers are Sethis, Marshia, Lituniah. Her parents died during the fire in which the village was decimated. The humans kidnapped her remaining family members, and she's left wandering the world, in search of them. Her few strengths are what keeps her alive, and well. The humans are looking for Miyu. so she's never safe, anywhere. "I cannot find the safehouse in which I was promised by Papi.." She frequently quotes. Her life was turned around when she met Lewis, an human who didn't try to kidnap or kill her, knowing who she was. He tells her he knows where her family is, but he's being deceitful, and luring her into a trap in which she will hopefully not fall into created by humans. Miyu is a witty. and smart young woman, she's ambitious and doesn't give in easily.

Her family lore goes back millions of years, her great X1,00000 grandparents created their clan, not knowing the humans would soon become jealous and deceitful of their land. After her village is destroyed, the humans take over the land, and establish camps, forcing their captives into labor. The lead humans name is Hicabus Delorieaus, his parents where foes against her dwarven village, and passed down to him what would be the worst massacre Miyu ever faced.

 

 

Personality Traits: *******, smart, witty, nice sometimes

Ambitions: To find her lost family

Strengths/Talents: Crafting, Building , Wielding, Fighting

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Cannot swim

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s

 

Height: 4' 11

Weight: 200lb

Hair: Black

Eye Colour: Blue

 

 

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What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

-Server lore is required in your biography. This can be found on our wiki.

-Your skin is not very roleplay appropriate. Please find a more fitting skin.

-Expand on your weaknesses.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

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