Application marc1824

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Minecraft Account name: Marc1824

How old are you?: Im 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: My time zome GMT+/--1:00 and i live in Denmark

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammer: Yes i think im alright.

Small description of me: Im a 14 year old boy. Who loves to play Minecraft, and I never hacked because it think it's boring and stupid.

How much time could you be on the server weekly: Let us say roughly 30 hours a week.

How long have you played Minecraft: I think its about 1½ year now

What do you know about roleplaying: I know a bit (minecraft) , i have been doing roleplay for around 3 years now and mostly on World of Warcraft

What do you expect this server to be like?: I's one of the biggest rp servers, so I hope it's very good.

What other servers have you been playing: I have been playing alot on a server called Cryptcraft, i left it because admins was ruining the whole concept of Survival

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules? Yes, they all seem fair and will be easy to follow.

Name 4 races on the server: Dwarf, Human, Elves and Orcs

How did you hear about us?: I heard about the server from one of my friends.

Did you vote?: Yes i voted, otherwise i wouldent be accepted wouldent i?

What was your favourite law?: No destroying of the worlds landscape, i hate seeing largly destroyed areas. It really destroys my Rp.

What was your least favourite law?: They all seemed fair, and they were all prober rules.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum accunt name?: Marc1824

Character name: Nethilie Halegryn

Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: marc1824

Biography: Once upon a time. There was two kids living on the street. They had never know their parents, and only knew each other. Life was tough and they had to beg for food to stay alive. One day the meet a old man wandering in the streets and they befriended him. He followed them to a mighty fort owned by the good Baron Kutul Darkbringer. They had traveled for an hour, when they heard a loud moan in the forest they were in. The moans got louder and louder and they quickly found themselves surrounded by 4 zombies. The boy and the man fought of all thir might. but was quickly defeated by the small zombie horde. The little girl fled when the zombies were feasting on the two dead bodies. She ran the direction they were walking before the short-lived battle. After five minutes of running in panic she arrived at the fort. She called out for somebody to open the gate. An orc opened and she ran inside, once inside she ran up to a man wearing silken cloth. She threw her arms around him and began to cry.

The man looked with pity upon this young lady and followed her to his barracks. He assigned her a room and gave her some privacy, the next day she walked up to him and asked him who he was, he smiled and answered: "Im Kutul Darkbringer, Baron of Oren" This is where the real story begin.........

Character age: Nethilie is 24 years old

Character Appearance: Reasonably average, no striking features and wears no armor. Nethilie is never the first to speak, she doesnt want start a fight neither join one. She despises war. If she sees an Orc hes not gonna fight it but gonna call for help from one of the patrolling guards.

Character Personality: Quiet and Shy. She is very wary of strangers. But once trust is gain, she is a friend like no other.

Your ambitions: To make my living from the land or join a major city and make a name for myself. To make a family, get friends and drive a shop with my husband "Malec"

Can your character read or write?: Nethilie learned to read and write by the old man she met in her young days.

Can your character mine?: No.

Are you a capable builder?: No she never learned that but she desired when she was a kid.

Can you wield a sword?: No.

Enjoy farming?: Nethilie loves to farm, she learned it by watching her mother who were in the farm all day.

Does your character have any special skills?: She's very curius

Your minecraft skin:

Other information: Well i dont really know what more i have to say.

[Wyrd 1]

I'm on the fence about your application. Overall, it's well done, however, there's an unwritten rule about writing powerful people into your application - it's considered unapproved lore. Also, your application, though it does seem to have a lot of thought put into it, has a lot of errors.

Look over it once more and be a little more discrete with your backstory. I'd really love to accept it.

For now: