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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Uthberic

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The no land scarring rule.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friends played on the server, and told me about it.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: To assume the role of a fictional character, this includes his/her personality. attitude, and fictional memories.

What is metagaming?: Using knowledge while roleplaying that is impossible for your character to know.

What is powergaming?: The act of assuming the action of your rolepay character is successful without giving the other person a chance to react.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Grug

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Dwarf

Character’s age: 250

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):  The very origins of Grug… Up until he joined an organization known as the guardians Grug spent his life underground, pick-ax in hand. His hair has turned black with the soot of world from all of his treasure hunting. His love for treasure was so high that he replaced all but one of his teeth with gold, and the last one is made of diamond. His eyes even seem to have captured the glimmer of gold. He also custom-made scrunchies of gold for his luscious beard. Due to the fact that he never stopped mining his family would have to travel through his extensive mines to bring him food. A mistake was made in the mines one day, the tunnels collapsed killing all his family aside from his sister Grenda. The collapsed mines exposed his treasure hoard, which was eventually stolen leading to Grug’s coming out of the ground. For several weeks he remained on the surface, blind. An organization known as The Guardians found the helplessly blind dwarf and brought him back to their fort in the city of Polaris. There they helped him to regain his vision and he chose to permanently join the group (not to share his loot though) led by the dwelven house Chrometracker. Whilst working for them he continued on his own little side quest to rebuild his riches. He had many an adventure with The Guardians, ranging from the exploration of Embermoore to the battle for the Dwarven Kingdom.

Personality Traits: Greedy, aggressive around shiny things, greedy, hard-working, bad-hygiene, did I mention greedy?

Ambitions: Reclaim his riches, improve upon his riches, and possibly steal somebody else’s riches

Strengths/Talents: Mining, tinkering, and he’s got some serious biceps

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He is extremely easily swayed or bought, he would betray his closest of friends for a gold flake.

Appearance: Black hair, eyes that appear to be golden, rather stout, ragged clothes, luscious black beard with golden scrunchies, a multitude of golden teeth, and one diamond tooth.

 

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This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

  • Your roleplaying and metagaming definitions are plagiarised. This is against the rules and if you are seen plagiarising again, it will result in a ban from applying.

 

  • Even after a long period of time, soot would not dye hair.

 

  • I'm unsure as to whether you are saying his eyes changed colour as a result of the mining but this would not be possible.

 

  • The name 'Chrometracker' for a dwarven house doesn't really sound right.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me or another AT member.

 

 

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