[Denied] [Pending] Maxis's application

[Maxis 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:NinjaBlade2008

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:always be in roleplay

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? my brother

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: where you act as a chosen character or one you made up

What is metagaming?:when someone uses knowledge of something they shouldn't know in game

What is powergaming?:the style of interactng with games or game like systems with the aim of maximizing process towards a specific goal instead of considerations over storyline, atmosphere , camaraderie, ect.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Characters's name: Bakuto

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age:50

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Bakuto was born and grew up in Laurelin the official state and capital of the wood elven people. He grew up without any knowledge of the outside world. He always wanted to leave and explore but his parents would never let him for it was dangerous out there. He spent his time reading books and training in archery.One day his parents passed away... He tried to move on though. It gotten hard for him without any parents to take car of him, but he kept practicing on his archery so he can someday be able to survive out there. After a while he started to get good at aiming so he tried it from a far distance near the gate. After he released the arrow it happened to miss and almost hit a human that was getting kicked out of the gates. The human happened to be named Shuya. So Shuya was surprisingly calm about the arrow that almost ended his life. Shuya walked up to the gate and said "you must think your a pretty sharp shooter the be at that range. Why don't you come with me? Bakuto quickly agreed and packed up his belongings to go with shuya on his journey back to the cloud temple.

Personality Traits: Childish, Energetic

Ambitions:To become the best archer and to join the army

Strengths/Talents:Sharp shooter and a adept acrobat

Weaknesses/Inabilities:no knowledge of the outside world, can rely on shuya too much sometimes ,shorter than the average wood elf

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Purple eyes, wears green, hazel brown hair, 5'8 feet tall, and weighs 178 pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://imgur.com/peJivga

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application is pending for the following reasons:

 

• Your powergaming definition is incorrect. Please fix this. Look at the link below for some help but remember to put it into your own words.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Powergaming

 

• Please add some more server lore to your biography. Look at the links below for some help with this.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Athera

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

You have 24 hours to make the requested changes. Failure to do so will result in a denial of this application. Please PM me once the changes are made.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me or another AT member.

 

 

This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• You edited your powergaming definition but in doing so, you plagiarised. This is against the rules and if you are seen plagiarising again, it will result in a ban from applying.

 

• You have not added enough server lore into your biography. Two place names is not enough. Add some events that happened that maybe your character was a part of.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me or another AT member.

[Chamosial 379]

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