[Denied] jonsaterdualist's Application

[Nerevar 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:  jonsaterdualist

How old are you?:  15 on May the 11th

Are you aware the server is PG-13:  Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:  Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  "The use of alternate personas purely for additional skills on one character is forbidden."

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?:  Nope.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?  My friend told me about it, his Minecraft Account Name is LK_WolfBoy.

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name:  Nerevar

Character’s sex:  Male

Character’s race:  High-Elf  (alt'mer)

Character’s age:  73

Biography: 

                        I was born in the lowlands of Krinford and was raised in the art of smithing.  My father was a simple man who worked as a smith but later went to work for the mines, and my mother was a baker her whole life.  Things went well up until I became 46.  My father and I were sent off to war to fight orcs in Gundz'koth.  Our assault on the orcs was all in vain.  As we were fleeing the region, I saw my father get shot in the back by an orc arrow.  Things were never the same for me. 

                       Upon my arrival at home, I began to smell the scent of smoke.  I ran home and found that rogue orcs had raided the village and killed almost everyone.  I ran to my house to find it in flames.  My mother did not survive the attack.  I tried to muster as many men as possible to exact our revenge against these lowlife orcs.  All were cowards except one.  Chey, a dark elf I had grown up with and had grown very close to.  He was the only one that was willing to come with me.

                       Chey and I are still looking for these orcs in the hopes that we will one day exact our revenge and regain the honor of our families. 

 

Personality Traits:  Friendly, brave, tolerant, helpful

Ambitions:  To kill the orcs that murdered my mother, father, and friends.

Strengths/Talents:  Smithing, combat, planning, reasoning, singing

Weaknesses/Inabilities:  archery, building, cooking

Appearance:  green eyes, black hair, pale skin, red coat, black pants.

 

Definitions

Role-Play Definition:  Role-Playing is much more than most people think it is.  It's not just making the character of your dreams, or somebody you want to be.  Role-Play is not just portraying, role-playing is keeping in character as you walk your own path through the game, and combining your story with all the other players' stories.

Meta-gaming Definition:  Meta-gaming is when somebody gets information that they never encountered, like knowing the future and being able to stop it without even being there to know what it was.  You have to interact with the game, and learn every bit of information by that interaction.

Power-gaming Definition:  Power-gaming is when somebody forces their actions onto another character, like when somebody would say "Bob kicked Fred in the jaw, knocking it loose and breaking it."  When people do that, that is Power-gaming.  Instead of doing this, a player should change it to be like this:  "Bob swung his leg toward Fred's jaw, hoping to break it."  That is Power-gaming, which i consider cheating and ruining the gameplay.

 

My RP Skin:

https://gyazo.com/fe6195c0faee0a60b3394a1a74e059da

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-We are not based off of the Elder Scrolls series. We have our own lore, which can be found on our wiki.

-Your definitions are taken from your friend's application. This is still plagiarizing, and doing so once more will lead to an application ban.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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