[Denied] My Whitelist Application

[DarkMage14 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: SoulMage1.

How old are you?: 13.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: War cannot be for no reason, it must be for roleplay's sake or for another legitimate reason that makes sense.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found it whilst browsing through top roleplay servers.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is a style of gameplay in which two or more players create a fictional or spin off storyline in which the players pretend to be a made up character in that storyline.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is using previous info from another game, event, etc, for personal gain or advantage

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is the style of interacting with games with the target for increasing progress towards a goal or multiple goals throughout gameplay by to the exclusion of lore, domain, etc.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Jaestro Ravenwing

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Goblin

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 27

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? etcetera.) Jaestro was born in 1520 in the nation of War Uzg. His mother was murdered shortly after his birth. He was raised by his mother for 12 years before he went on by himself to study the art of necromancy. He secluded himself from the rest of society to fully concentrate on his studies. He even hid himself from the orcs in order to prevent his hideout from getting raided. He continued doing this for almost 3 years before finishing his work. He decided he needed to make a living, so he worked as a blacksmith, crafting most of the axes used in orcish battle, which ultimately turned the suspicion of his necromancy away from himself. 

                 After the disappearance of his mother, Jaestro became depressed and once again, secluded himself from society. To help ease his depression, he began to start research on another topic: the Massacre of Wett. He began to study the people murdered at the time and even those who commited the crime. He researched this event for 6 years, and lost his depression in 1541. He began to interact with the other orcs but never paid attention to their customs. He was a peaceful soul until 1547, when he traveled to Lin'sulan in secret and managed to allegedly kill 4 elves and injure 6, throwing the dead ones into a fire he had camped outside the city with. After his crime, he traveled back to the War Uzg and once again, began to live a decent life as a goblin.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Jaestro is a very deceptive and sneaky goblin, able to manipulate those who get in his way and even persuading them that he has the same beliefs as the creature he talks to. He is very interested in the art of necromancy and has even studied it for almost 3 years, however, he has not been able to perform any spells in this category, but wishes to find someone who can properly teach him the strategies and technique of the undead. He despises Elves because one had killed his Father when he was a newborn, and has killed four and threw their bodies into a fire to cover his tracks. He was also able to injure 6 others without burning them. He wants to forgive the elfish race, but he hasn't ever since, which led him to the path of darkness. He is very interested in researching new topics and loves to find more information about Vailor and it's lore, to the point where at times he obsesses over it.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Jaestro wishes to become a powerful necromancer, powerful enough to take revenge on the elf that killed his father.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Jaestro has extensive knowledge on the art of necromancy. He is also very skillful with a bo staff and very speedy and sleek as he fights.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Jaesro's ambition for revenge blinds him from seeing the good in the world and leads him into darkness. He is also very impatient and attacks enemies too early to plan any strategy for battle.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Jaestro is the size of the average goblin, being 6 foot 3. His skin is green and he wears black robes with the sleeves ripped at the opening. His pants are deep purple and sharpened toenails. He wears a skeletal mask that hides his face from all the scars and burns from his previous crimes and fights, but you can easily see 2 distinctive brown pupils.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

 

 

[WuHanXianShi14 0]

under review.

[WuHanXianShi14 0]

Unfortunately this app is DENIED.

 

Good work on studying up on your server lore, but I have to deny your app for a few reasons.

 

• Your powergaming definition is wrong.
• Your metagaming definition is wrong.

You can find the right definitions in our wiki.

 

• You can't be learning a magic in your whitelist app, you need to find a teacher in-game once you get accepted.
• "_______ killed my parents" is very cliche for a backstory, almost everyone uses it! Consider doing something else.

[WuHanXianShi14 0]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.