[Denied] Application

[TheRoadRunner 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: ExileCause

How old are you?: 15.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: War cannot be for no reason, it must be for roleplay's sake or for another legitimate reason that makes sense.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found it whilst browsing through top roleplay servers.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is a style of gameplay in which two or more players create a fictional or spin off storyline in which the players pretend to be a made up character in that storyline.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is using previous info from another game, event, etc, for personal gain or advantage

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is the style of interacting with games with the target for increasing progress towards a goal or multiple goals throughout gameplay by to the exclusion of lore, domain, etc.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Phoenixsun

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Heartlanders

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 32

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? etcetera.)Phoenixsun was born in 1520 In A Battle Between The Humans And Orc. His Mother And Father Has Been captured By a unknown Person. He was Raised By A Fellow human before he went on by himself to study art of mage skills. He secluded himself from the rest of society to fully concentrate on his studies. He even hid himself from the orcs in order to prevent getting killed. He continued doing this for almost 5 years before finishing his work. He decided he needed to make a living, so he worked as a  crafting which ultimately turned the suspicion of hi smage skillsaway from himself. 

                 After the disappearance of his mother and father, PhoenixSun became very lonly he started to began a adventure to find a village. Once PhoenixSun said "I will Kill Who ever took my parents for humanity!". Whne PhoenixSun Dident find any villages you soon began to look for his long lost parents capture by unkowns for years. When PhoenixSun fell into a orc's camp he simply battled the orcs and unlocked a true secret of his eyes.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) PhoenixSun is a scavenger mage what he dislikes is orcs and what he likes is to eat chicken nuggets

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) PhoenixSun will be a powerful mage that will use a spell to track his parents

Strength/Talents: (what is your character realy realy good at) PhoenixSun is realy good at Casting Meteor Spells and casting healing spells but will soon will learn Tracking Spell.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) PhoniexSun's powerfull weakness is looking at a orcs face because its too ugly.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) PhoenixSun is the size of the averageHuman, being 5 Foot 3. His skin is a black old hoodie and black and white old shoes with a bandit mask on his face.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/7776958/dsad/.)

 

 

[CheekyNolan 5420]

Denied

• Your powergaming definition is incorrect, please correct this.
• Pheonixsun is not an acceptable name for a Human nor any race, please choose something more fitting.
• Your biography does not have the minimum of three points of lore, please add more next time which can be found here.
• You cannot apply having already known magic, please remove anything relating to this.
• Your village being raided/parents taken by orcs when you were a child is very cliche, and swearing to kill or orcs even more so. Please try to avoid using this as your character's background.
• Your weakness is not really a weakness, please add something more personal or fitting for a weakness.
• Your skin is not acceptable because hoodies haven't been invented yet in the 1550s but humans also don't have white hair or purple eyes. Alongside this you cannot have one red and black eye simply because it doesn't make sense genetically and there's no magic that does this to someone. Please find a more roleplay appropriate skin.

You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any comments or questions, please feel free to PM me!

[CheekyNolan 5420]

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