[Denied] [Pending] jamiemahy123 Application

[jamiemahy123 1]

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: jamiemahy123

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with the rule of no hacking and exploiting, which I find that this ruins roleplaying.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): I understand all of the current rules, and will not hesitate to ask if I don’t understand new races.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: The way I found out about Lord of the Craft is by a friend.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is an act in a role. Having a behaviour relevant  to the role you are currently acting, relevant to your character.

What is metagaming?:  Metagaming is where you know something/someone in real life without knowing anything about them previously in roleplay.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Powergaming is when you do an unfair action. This is unfair and massively ruins roleplay. For example, let’s say I walk up to someone and say, “Look at this”, and stabs them with an overpowered sword.

 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: B’atress Broxo

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: High Elf Impure

Character’s age: 24

Biography:

I was born and raised in Tei’mador, alongside with my brother Luis Broxo, a posh family who’m enjoys travelling and exploring around the countryside. It was extremely hard as my brother never actually talked to me, so I decided to begin to receive an education. After 5 years of having an education, I still wander around and explore with my brother, although we rarely talk, as I help Luis and my adopted brother, Tobi Sangre, to help find his sister out in the unknown wild. My family search around Haelun’or, but then soon realised that we were not welcome, and that we had to leave immediately. Whilst at Haelun’or, my bones got a bit weak, and disaster struck. I was attacked and captured by the guards of Haelun’or, therefore now wherever I go, I’m afraid that someone may suddenly attack me again.

 

Personality Traits: Looking smart, a good communicator, and my knowledge.

Ambitions: My ambitions in life is to become an accountant in life, when I finally grow up towards 100 years of age, when I finally become an adult.

Strengths/Talents: My strengths are using a bow, and getting resources for my fellow people.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:My weaknesses are attempting to hold a dagger and fight, and carrying blocks and placing them. I have weak bones, therefore I cannot run quickly and go far distances without trouble.

Appearance: I have central heterochromia just like my brother, therefore I have one blue eye and one green eye. I have an average height of 6.1, and like fiddling with my wavy, curly hair. I enjoy wearing a suit out, as I like looking smart.

Skin:

 

 

 

Edited March 26, 2016 by jamiemahy123
Moderator wanted me to change some parts of my application: My skin will be coming soon, but for now it will be the suit one.

[jamesb 218]

 

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Your application has been put on [PENDING]

 

What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

Click HERE to be brought to a wiki page, that may aid you with definitions. Be sure to use your own words! 

 

The changes needed are as follows,

 

- Your metagaming definition is incomplete. While your example is correct, the definition itself needs some work.

- Your power gaming definition is incorrect.

- Flesh out your biography a bit(maybe add a crucial event that took place in your character's childhood, that changed their personality? Who are your character's parents? Etc.) .

- Suits aren't common garb for people on LotC, please find a different skin.

 

 

When you've made the changes or if you want help, please visit my profile and send me a Private Message. 

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

 

[jamesb 218]

Application Denied.

 

For failing to respond to prompts given through private message in the allotted time, this application has been denied. You must wait 24 hours before re-applying. Re-applying before this will result in an immediate denial.

 

Please message me if you have any questions, and good luck in applying!

[jamesb 218]

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