[Denied] Whitelist Application

[Lillian 0]

 Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft account name?: Neonkitty12134
How old are you?: 13
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes i am aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes i have looked over the rules and agree

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Hostile and Toxic behavior, directed any anyone or on any medium, will not be tolerated. (thank you for this i hate reading chat and seeing hostility and people just being mean.)

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Your characters cannot interact with each other in any way. The one exception is that you may play the child of your character. (i kinda just don't at all get it sorry i sorta? to me its confusing sorry can you explain it to me?)

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: 
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): This is my first white list application. I was searching through tons of role-playing servers but most either had barely any players or when i played (no whitelist servers) them it was to confusing hardly anyone helped me or the events were boring. I found this server and saw great results and i was hoping that this server would finally be the great server i have been looking for. I hope i get accepted and i will keep trying until i do and sorry if thats annoying.
 
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!
 
What is roleplaying?: A character you have created yourself that does not exist and a game that makes that character real and you play on that certain game. ( is a role-player)

What is meta-gaming?: A cheater or someone in the role playing server mostly that uses other devices or ways to help them in a certain game without the other players knowledge of how they knew a certain thing.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: The story of the game. or in other words the way of letting another player know of something before you do it.
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Lillian (no last name)
Character’s sex:  female
Character’s race: Human
Character’s age: 18

Biography  : (1516)(umm does it matter which date i choose or do i not choose at all?) a little baby was born into a small sheep farm which was in the north region which was covered in snow. Alone in the small cabin sat Lillian (the baby) and her two parents Peter and his wife Venus. Alone from the other towns and villages Lillian grew up alone tending to her parents sheep and never venturing far. Her parents taught her to always respect the patrons of the pantheon. More over  Xan, Aengul of Order and Guardianship then any of the others. Trust issues and doubt began to appear at the thought of the other races to Lillian since her parents warned her about how they were untrustworthy. More specifically orks. Lillian tried not to agree with her parents but with her obedient attitude made it difficult. She grew up becoming shy and awkward with people and had poor speaking skills. And before you knew it a problem emerged. Her family was attacked by Cervitaur's they survived but barely and most of there sheep ran from fear. With little to no food there parents sadly had to send off there only daughter and child to go out into the world to save them and this is where our story begins....

Personality Traits: kind,short tempered, loves food, dislikes people who hurt or insult others, shy, horrible at sticking with people, clumsy, bad sense of direction,coward, bad memory, and will try her best to make everyone around her happy as can be but is really awkward at doing it so she doesn't really succeed.

 

Ambitions: To be someone who her parents can be proud of.

Strengths/Talents: Running away, Archery, Hiding,Complaining, Getting lost, and Being a genuinely nice person.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Hand to hand combat, Sword fighting, Being brave, Trusting others, and letting others take lead.

Appearance: Brown hair fading into a lighter shades of brown, 5'2 in height, no scars, Wears a red shirt with straps on her arms, Blue shorts with two white buttons, and wears old worn out red boots that reach a little over the knee.
 

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Your Application has sadly been DENIED!

 

This app is so close to acceptance, however I feel a few changes could be made. Let me just walk you through a few suggestions so the next app you post will be worthy of acceptance!

 

Firstly, your meta-gaming definition is somewhat correct- however, not fully fledged out. I would suggest you look HERE and study that definition and put it into your own words. Your power-emoting definition on the other hand is completely wrong- don't fret, please look HERE and study that definition and put it into your own words. I cannot stress putting these definitions into your own words, plagiarism is not allowed on LoTC whatsoever!

 

Secondly, I loved your bio, however I felt it could've used more LORE. I suggest you find a Human city/town on the Wiki and implement it into your application.

 

Thirdly, as much as I love your skin, I don't think it's suitable for our server. Please find another one if possible.

 

 

If you need any help whatsoever, I am a message away. Please, feel free to message me on the forums any time and I will help you with whatever you're having trouble with. I wish you the best of luck in your next application, Neonkitty.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.