[Denied] Application

[HAPPYHOUR1369 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:HAPPYHOUR1369

How old are you?:18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: "Cyber-bullying", through repeated harassment or any other means will not be tolerated. Those partaking in or promoting such will be severely punished.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I looked up roleplaying server.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Sir Ulric Bele

Character’s sex: (male or female?)Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)27

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)I come frome the Kingdom of Vandoria. I was born there in the year 1520.(1547 current year?)I have lived here for all of my life, until my mother was kidnapped by a group of orcs. So far i havent worked up the courage to go find her. Its been 4 months. I am going to leave for iron uzg, the nation of orcs to fund my mother. My little brother wants to come with me, but i think its to dangerous. Hes only 15, He has his whole life ahead of him. He cant risk his life like that. But then again I need all of the help i can get. I shall leave at once. Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)Im witty, strong, but kind hearted. I try to do whats best for my kingdom.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)I want to become a great warrior

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)sparring

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)Courage

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)Im 6'4, Black Hair, No scars.

 

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This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• You have failed to include the definitions. These are a must if you wish to be accepted. Please copy them over from the template.

 

• The title 'Sir' cannot be used when applying as this is something that you would get through significant roleplay when accepted to the server. Please remove it from the start of your character's name.

 

• Parents or just your mother in this case getting kidnapped by orcs is very cliche and overused. Please think of something more original to put as your character's backstory.

 

• The link for your skin is broken so I cannot see it. Please fix this. If you need help in doing so, look at the instructions in the spoiler below.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me.

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