[Denied] My Application

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What’s your Minecraft account name?:wolfycom2

How old are you?:16

Are you aware the server is PG-13:yes i am aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes i have

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Excessive trolling is not allowed

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? :no i am not confused with any of the rules

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: minecraft-mp.com

Character’s name: Alfein

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 34

Biography: I am Alfein. I come from The Kingdom of Renatus. i was born there in 1516.

i lived there my whole life, until my parents were killed by a couple of orcs.

I know it was my fault because my parents always told me to lock the doors after i come in from training

and this one day i forgot and saw the orcs slaughter my parents. Years have pasts and my thirst for revenge is still

alive

Personality Traits: Friendly,Social, Strong, and Serious

Ambitions:i wish to achieve my way of living

Strengths/Talents:Cooperation, and magic

Weaknesses/Inabilities: responsibilities

Appearance: i have black hair, hazel eyes, i am light skinned, i am 6,3, and dark blue assassin jacket

Skin:https://gyazo.com/d50b04814d971075f71671579cf53b15

What is roleplaying?:assume a character and act out there feelings along with with there sight

What is metagaming?:the point of roleplaying is to have fun

What is power-emoting?:stay in act with my character and have fun while doing so

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your metagaming and power-emoting definitions are incorrect. Please fix them. Look at the links below for some help but make sure to put them into your own words.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

 

• Your biography is far too short. Please expand upon it and make it the size of two decent paragraphs.

 

• Your biography contains little server lore. Please add some more and aim for at least three references to it. Look at the link below for some help.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

• Your character would not have been born in the Kingdom of Renatus as they are too young. It was a Kingdom in Aegis and Asulon which are both previous realms. We are currently in the Realm of Vailor and so, your character would have been born there. 

 

• You cannot have 'magic' as one of your strengths as your character is not able to know magic upon applying. It is something that you achieve through significant roleplay once accepted.

 

• Most people wish 'to achieve their way of living'. Think of an ambition that would be more original to your character. For example, does he want to become a guard? A blacksmith?

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me.

[Chamosial 379]

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