[✔] [Accepted] 3rd whitelist application

[Lillian 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft account name?: Neonkitty12134
How old are you?: 13
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes i am aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes i have looked over the rules and agree

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Hostile and Toxic behavior, directed any anyone or on any medium, will not be tolerated.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Your characters cannot interact with each other in any way. The one exception is that you may play the child of your character.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: 
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): This is my first white list application. I was searching through tons of role-playing servers but most either had barely any players or when i played (no whitelist servers) them it was to confusing hardly anyone helped me or the events were boring. I found this server and saw great results and i was hoping that this server would finally be the great server i have been looking for.
 
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!
 
What is roleplaying?: A character you have created yourself that does not exist and a game that makes that character real and you play on that certain game. ( is a role-player)

 

What is meta-gaming?: Whenever you do something out of your character like talk about something else other then the game . Or when ever you do something that has nothing to do with the story line (roleplaying story) and it isn't something characters in the game know about Knowing something that isn't possible in the game or in terms the story. Like names or races or even locations that you found through other means not in the game or other ways. 

 

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Whenever a player has the upper hand in ways of magic class or even armor. A easier way of saying it is like a veteran player killing off a new newb who has just spawned. The veteran obviously has the upper hand in a way where the other player can't win making him power-emoting. When a player something impossible like holding anvils and being able to move with no restraint or even means armor vs no armor the no armor would be faster in many means since it has nothing holding him/her down making it easier. while amor makes it difficult. or even a sword since a sword has drawbacks like balance or even fatigue. staying awake for days with no signs of fatigue could be power-emoting since its not really possible.
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Lillian (no last name)
Character’s sex:  female
Character’s race: Half human half elf (elves are they both correct?)
Character’s age: 18

Biography  : (1516) A beautiful woman was running from the 'battle of Leyulin" she had broken a rule not a written rule an unspoken one. she had a child with a human she was going to have a half-ling even the curse couldn't help her. The mother knew the wars would not stop another reason she ran but also for the babies safety. She ran to a village called Krinford and hid her ears that showed her heritage and wore a cloak to hide her white/silver hair. She set up a cabin at the edge of the village in hopes no one would find her. She raised her daughter Lillian a beautiful young girl a half-ling with blue eyes and brown faded into white. The most noticeable thing was her small elf ears (elves).And as time grew on Lillian hid her ears like her mother. They hunted and made friends with the near by Cervitaur's although they were careful not to go in there territory often. Lillian grew up shy and curious of the other races like the orks ,or the dwarves,Elves especially. They lived in peace until Lillian 18th birthday...(NIGHT)Dominion of Malin was created on her birthday and Lillians mother thought of it as good luck until she heard her daughter scream. As she ran through the forest she saw people wearing black no distinctive feature showing what race they were.

They knocked them both out and tied them to a tree. When Lillian woke up her vision was blurred and all she could see was glimpses of her mother carrying her and running. but from what?

As she almost slipped unconscious she caught sight of her mother hiding her under a tree hiding her before she saw her run off. When Lillian woke up she was alone in the forest the night sky was the only light she had. And as she left the only thing on her mind was ~i have to find my mother~ and off she was the beginning of her new journey......

 

Personality Traits: kind,short tempered, clever, doesn't talk about her past often, loves food, dislikes people who hurt or insult others, shy, horrible at sticking with people, clumsy, bad sense of direction,coward, bad memory, and will try her best to make everyone around her happy as can be (though she fails teribbly).

Ambitions: To find her mother or what happened to her.

 

Strengths/Talents: Running away, Archery, Hiding,Complaining, Getting lost, and Being a genuinely nice person.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Hand to hand combat, Sword fighting, Being brave, Trusting others, and letting others take lead.

Appearance: Brown hair fading into a lighter shades of brown, Has small elf ears,5'2 in height, no scars, wears a blue undershirt that leads all the way down under the bottom of the vest ,vest leading into a skirt and it has two yellow (gold) buttons, a black belt with a single gold button, wearing brown gloves, and brown small boots.
 

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Your application has been put on PENDING

 

What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

Please edit the fix the following problems by utilizing the 'EDIT' feature:

 

Firstly, your meta-gaming and power-emoting definitions could be slightly better. Please refer to these two links. These links will give you the definitions of what meta-gaming and power-emoting are. Please put these definitions into your own words, do not copy/paste the definitions! (I will know if you do!)

 

META-GAMING

POWER-EMOTING

 

Secondly, to be a Halfling you have to have a Halfling mother and a Halfling father. If you had an Elf and a Human you'd merely be half-elf half-human. If you want to be a Halfling I suggest you adjust your back story so that you were born to Halfling parents. However, if staying as a half Elf half Human is okay with you, then I suggest you do.

 

Thirdly, please change your biography so that it excludes the cliche of having "trolls" or "orcs" murdering your family. Make something origional, something tat would catch my eye. Your mother can still die if you wish, however make it an unlikely event (fatal accident, murdered by close friend, lost somewhere beyond the reaches of civilization).

 

If you want help or need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me to.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Your Application has been ACCEPTED!

 

This application is accepted. On the behalf of the Application Team we welcome you to the server as a whitelisted player. Please wait patiently as a GM will implement you to the server shortly! While you are waiting you are more than welcome to browse the forums and/or Wiki to refresh your mind on server events and lore. I also suggest you review power-emoting. Not that your definition was bad, it was just slightly off. Otherwise...

 

An absolutely astonishing application, Neonkitty! I can't wait to see you in-game, if you need any assistance, feel free to send me a message on the forums or on skype (thomascovey1181). Enjoy your adventures in Vailor!

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

[Dohvi 622]

Player Whitelisted.