[Denied] [Pending] SandstormS13 roleplay forum 2

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What’s your Minecraft account name?: SandstormS 13

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 : yes i am aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes every page

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: rule 5 : no swearing and use of bad language.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: a friend showed me this server.

 

What is roleplaying?: A type of acting or performing where you play a role as a character.

What is metagaming?: the world outside the game, knowing information you in game character doeas not.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Acting out without the other being able to react, or forcing an action on another player.

Character’s name: Roizor

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: wood elves

Character’s age: 36

Biography: In the forest there were 4 wood elves living in a cottage along a river in a village.

The 4 wood elves were the mom and dad and big brother of young Raizor who was just a born baby.

When Raizor became older his brother secretly taught him how to shoot a bow and arrow when his parents weren’t at home. After a few months his dad figured out what his brother was teaching Roizor and took advantage from that and sold him to the army as soldier at the age of 15 because the dad thought he was good enof for the army and had loads of rents to pay..  After 20 of being in the army and fight orcs and practicing his bow shots and sword skills  Roizor got told that he was free to go back to his own home and see his family again. He traveled for a half year to go back to his home to be surprised by a different family living in his home. They told him that his parents and brother died by a bunch of orcs that came across their home while marching through the forest. With disappointment Raizor traveled through lands and villages through cities and farms looking for a job. But every time he asked they all said no.

After almost giving it up he stumbled upon 1 more village and this farmer told him that his brother was looking for workers as assassin which took my interest so I decided to follow the rout he told me to go and eventually i came to the brother of the farmer. I told him that I came from far to look for a job and told him that his brother sent me. He then told ok…. Well your first mission is to kill a Dwarf and bring him to me as soon as he told me that I panicked and said oh no im not going to do that. He then told me well you gonna have to otherwise you gonna die. I thought oh god what have a brought myself into and fled as soon as he let me go to hunt for that dwarf. I fled in the forests and up in the mountains where I met these very nice humans  who were in the middle of stating the dinner. I told them my whole story and loved it and then said “ if you want you can stay with us and live in peace” i answered no thank you but still stayed for the rest of the day. The next day I got told by them that in the city there were was a butcher which was a good friend of them. They said that he needed a worker. I decided to go and try that out but it wasent such a success so I quit and stole his horse and galoped away hoping to someday in the future to find a better place to live and get some money and find what i love . In the future I might try to start my own farm and try to get myself a family to love.

Personality Traits: biting his nails; cooked beef and listening to music.

dislikes chopping wood and killing poor animals ( but would do it if have to.)

Ambitions: energetic

Strengths/Talents: shooting a bow, Running/walking, puzzles and answering questions and making friends.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: fighting with a sword and finding directions were to go.

Appearance: (my character looks like a wood elf with leather armour and a bit of iron mixed in, has a beard and long brown hair with a type of ponytail in. My character is 1.95m  .has 1 scar on his back because of a cat that scratched him when he was young.

Skin:

[Readicti 902]

Your application has been put on pending. Please go over the comments bellow and make the necessary changes. You have 24 hours to complete the changes. Send me a forum message when you are done so I may look at this application again.

• Your metagaming definition is not exactly correct. It is true that metagaming has to do with getting information, but try to think about how metagaming is related to roleplay.
• Your power emoting definition is incorrect.
• A reminder that elves are seen as children until the age of 50. So if you were to roleplay at your current age, you'd be treated as a child. 
• Having your parents killed by orcs is cliche. 
• Being energetic is not an ambition. Try to think of something realistic that your character wants to do with his life. What are his goals for the future?
• Not a big deal but a reminder to put elf ears on your skin~ 

Overall your application just needs a few small changes. Please make them and message me when you are done. If you have any questions, feel free to message me. 

You have been denied due to plagiarism of another's application. Copying someone else's work is a serious offense. If you are caught plagiarizing again, you will be banned from applying for a certain amount of time. You may re-apply in 24 hours. 

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