[Denied] Applaction or what ever XD

[Okami Urotsui 1]

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: _Thing3

How old are you?: 10

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes (that is no worry because I usually only go to PG-13 movies)

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: They are all something i agree with but overall, derogatory speech is the one I most agree with.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): None.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Through a YouTube video.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): None.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Becoming a character and living there life, not yours. For some like me living my life would be SUPER boring.

What is metagaming?: using information tools (like Skype, iMessage, snapchat, etc.) to request help, or guidence.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: you character does something that realisctly the couldn't do (for example, Chops Joey into 1" 3" inch slices)

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Kitsune Yuro'Ni

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Female

Character’s race: you can find all the playable races here.) Dark Elve

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 26

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): . Kitsune Yuro'Ni (her name meaning fox at night) was one of the dark elves who assassinated Grand King Skippy. She never was quite as ruthless as others. She wanted to go on an adventure were she didn't have to kill anyone.

.  Kitsune was born in Laurelin. She enjoyed adventures she would have on the island. She loved going deep into the forest, in the darkness and finding patches of sunlight.

.   Kitsune was named, Wolf At Night, because she was clever and sneaky, like a fox. She was also a skilled artist who loved draw nature and history. Her favorite being when Kal Akash was attacked by unknown dark entities (presumably them). After 25 years of living with her family she fled. He location is not known today. Her age is currently 26.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Kitsune is a great artist. She can make her own clothes, and adores doing it! Drawing is her favorite hobby, clothes making night next to it. She dislikes her mother who wants her to be a ruthless killer, so she fled.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Though at the moment she is a thief, wandering streets for easy to steal food she wants to be good. Good not evil, or a killer, just good.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Art, sneaky thief, tailoring (clothes making), and becoming friends with others.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) In evils eyes, she need to stop worrying about friends and learn to KILL! In purities eyes, she need to completely under go her transformation from evil to good.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Height: 5" 6". Thin waist. NORMAL (i repeat normal) sized bust. Silver hair with black streaks in places. Large scar across right eye brow.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) Below

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Edited April 6, 2016 by Okami Urotsui
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[NicktheRed20 215]

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

-Please elaborate on all three of your definitions

 

-Your biography needs to be in paragraph format

You said your character's name is fox at night in the first line, then Wolf at Night in the next several lines

 

-Please give your character a clearer goal in life

 

-The weaknesses that put you put aren't exactly weaknesses. Please make sure to add some actual handicaps

 

-5'6 is pretty short for an elf

 

-Your skin better suits a High Elf instead of a Dark Elf. Please find a skin to better suit your character.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[NicktheRed20 215]

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