[Denied] Whitelist Application

[PippyOmega 2]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Pippy_Omega

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with all of the rules but, in particular, I think that the anti-bullying rule is very important because it makes players able to  have more fun on the server

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No, I understand all of the rules and will abide by them.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friend Coold00d12 (Allready on your server) told me about it

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is to get into a character and act, speak and perform like you were that person (or any other animal/creature etc.). You must keep your actions linked with the character you're playing and imagine yourself in the setting of your character.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when somebody uses their own knowledge and comprehension inside a fictional gaming world for their own benefit.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when a character does something in a game or role play which the player wouldn't realistically be able to do in real life.

 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Pippy

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Elf (Wood Elf)

Character’s age: 37

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.) : 
Pippy Was Born And Raised In A Small Village not far from Laurelin. Pippy's  Father had been a great archer and had been teaching Pippy for years intill he left out of the blew, Pippy's mother had been left to look after Him all by her self and it wasn't easy because he liked to get in lots of trouble but as he grew up he wanted to find his Father and show him that he had been practicing since he had left. He decided to embark on a quest to find his Father but it would be a long and dangerous road which he was willing to take. On his journey he had incountered a group of bandits that attacked him, Pippy threw his sword at one of the bandits but as it hit the ground a tall High Lander blocked the attack of the bandit with his Carbarum Battle-Axe he picked up Pippy's Sword and told him to run ever since that day Pippy had two quests to meet up with his savior and to find his Father.

 

Personality:

- Nice

- Caring

- Descent Archer

- Smart

 

Ambitions:

- To Find His Father

-Meet The Tall High Lander

- Become A Ronouned Archer

 

Talents:

- Fast

- Good At Parkour

- Bows

- Making Friends

 

Weaknesses:

- Swords

- Low Self-Confidence

 

 

[Tsuyose 3285]

Denied.

 

 

It's quite clear you've attempted to copy from another application as it shows in this application. This is your first warning.

 

 

You're required to completely change your roleplaying, power-emoting, and meta-gaming definitions to fit explanations of your standard and wording.

 

Nevertheless, in regards to your application I implore that you add some additional server-based lore to the biography to show that you are indeed versed in some aspects of our lore. (I also implore that you provide a tad more than this in your biography. Perhaps provide some more in-depth knowledge to your character, his past, and so on.)

 

In addition to the above you're required to re-fill the plagiarised sections and you may re-submit your application after 24 hours have passed. If you're in need of assistance with the development of your next application feel free to drop me a forum message.

[Tsuyose 3285]

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