[Denied] Application

[windseer 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
 
What’s your Minecraft account name?: windseer
How old are you?: 22
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: harassment and being toxic 
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: my friends 
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): none
 
 
Definitions
 
What is roleplaying?: acting or living as another being
What is metagaming?: playing to win by using outside knowledge from your being
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: midmaxing your being
 
In-Character Information
 
Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Zenomr Dreadjeer
Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Goblin
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 32
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): I was born in realm of Aegis, to my father Helkus in the Dreadjeer tribe. We were a nomadic tribe and the descendants of Krug, so we never stayed long in any one place so we can go on hunts and chase our enemies. My father helped build the war machines that were used to fight and hunt those that would challenge or dishonor us, so I was raised to do the same. When it came near time for a battle, it would my job to check the circuits and gears to make sure nothing was broken or misplaced in the machines. When the the time came for battle, we would be near the machines to protect them and fix anything that would go wrong. It was hard but a honorable job and I was satisfied with it but one day, a Farseer named Vuef came to the tribe's leader Tar to warn him of a vision he had of the tribe being over run by the undead. Tar took the warning and thanked Vuef for the warning. Two years passed and the memory faded from the people of the tribe. We came to an abandon keep to rid it of our enemies and their was nothing different about the purge we were gong to preform on it. It was just like the other hundred times we have done it but, when we charged in it was empty. We spent hours searching the area for the undead we came to kill but none were found so Tar ordered us to go back to camp and leave but when w got back to camp it was aflame, shredded, and cover in the blood of my tribe. We fought with all the might and rage we had but for every one we killed, two more replaced it. It was not long before our forces were far to few and the end was in sight. As I was in the war machine working on keeping it, but it was falling apart at the seams and it was not long before it collapsed in on itself and buried me alive. As I came to, I moved the pieces off of me one piece at a time. It did not take me long to get free but when I emerged from the ruble, I saw the sun in the sky and the bodies of my tribe scattered on the ground. A day later after honoring the fallen, I packed what was left and started on my way to find out why the undead were so well organized and why there were so many of them.      
Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) I aspire to learn of ways to destroy the undead and rebuild the tribe
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) mechanics, strategy, and dexterity
Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) hand to hand combat, physical strength,and hygiene 
Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) red skin, 4,4 feet, black hair, scar over left eye from collapsed war machine  
Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

Your definition of Metagaming is vague, please refer to https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying for guidance.

 

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying for guidance.

 

Your lore is dated back to a time when your character would not be alive. Please use more current lore that ties into your character directly. Aegis was over 200 years ago.

 

Please include more (current) Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for orcs can be found on the Wiki ( https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Orcs )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.
 

Please fill in your personality traits (~3) -- these are not physical attributes or skills.

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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