[Denied] App's Application

[AppYT 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
What’s your Minecraft account name?: AppYT
How old are you?: 12 (Parents have given me permission as they trust me to be very mature :P
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, PG-13 is nothing compared to my friends! xD kidding! :P
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No excessive memes, they can be very unfitting for the roleplay!
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No 
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:  I was looking up roleplay servers and saw this little server and loved it when I joining.
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): ???? First time applying for a white listed server.

Definitions
What is roleplaying?: When you play a role of a character.
What is metagaming?: Take control. DO NOT METAGAME ITS ANNOYING :P
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Doing something you cant do if it was realistic.

In-Character Information
Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) App Ellis
Character’s sex: (male or female?) female
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Dark Elf
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 22 (human years)
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) App Ellis is from Felsen. She is a traveler who explores a lot with Luffy  A'ann.  She has mainly traveled to Vivec as its where she was born. App was born during the wars. She was abandoned due to her mother dying and her father leaving to fight. When she was 6 she meet a girl who was 1 year older than her. App was found in there garden. She was passed out and had bruises and cuts on her and Luffy healed her. They became long life friends as they shared a lot in common. She is from the realm Vailor. As her mother died and she became 6 Luffy took her in as a sister. She cared for her. She now lives along with Luffy and they travel the world.
Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) very fumy and caring. but you cross her, you better hope you don't cross her path again. Raise a hand to her? Be prepared to not have it anymore. Shes very shy and mainly only chats with her good pal (as mentioned before) Luffy! xD
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)  A Lord
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Fighting with a sword and healing people, a learned trait from Luffy.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Trust.
Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) App Ellis is short with long  blue hair. It may be unnatural for her race but shes unnatural. Her magical abilities give her cat ears and a tail making her a Mif'wa. She wares a dark black cloak over her white shirt and gray slort. She has bright green eyes.
Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) Computer hated me so heres the link due to the skin file not working. http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/8425920/apps-rp-skin-for-lotc/

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your roleplaying definition is vague. Please expand upon it. Look at the link below for some help with this but make sure to put it into your own words.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying

 

• Your metagaming definition is incorrect. Please fix this. Look at the link below for some help with this but make sure to put it into your own words.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

 

• Your power-emoting definition is vague. Please expand upon it. Look at the link below for some help with this but make sure to put it into your own words.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

 

• Your biography is too short. Please expand upon it and make it the length of two decent sized paragraphs.

 

• You say that your character was abandoned when she was young. It is very unlikely and unrealistic that such a young child would have the capability to survive and fend for themselves. 

 

• Your character cannot have magical abilities nor are there any that would give a dark elf cat ears and a tail. There is no such creature as a Mif'wa on LotC.

 

• Your skin is not appropriate for the server. The clothing is too modern for the medieval era that the server is set within. Dark elves have dark skin and if you are saying your character was born with blue hair, this is not natural for a dark elf. Look at the link below for an idea of the appearance of a dark elf. Please change your skin to be more fitting.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dark_Elves

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me.

[Chamosial 379]

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