[Denied] 5th

[blackdeath9999 1]

Minecraft Username:BlackDeath9999

age: 13

Are you aware that this is a pg 13 server: yes

Have you read the Rules: yes 

What rule do you agree with the most: The very last one at the bottom of the page

Are there any rules that confuse you:no 

I have also read all the Lore 

Minecraft roleplay:

Character Name: Joe 

Character nickname:Black  

Character age: 27

character gender: male

Character Race: Human 

Personality Traits:

Weakness: fast moving targets  and up close combat 

Strength/Talents Night time and able to sneak to place to place like the skills of an assassin

Goal in life: To help others like him who lost every thing.

How My Character Acts: he takes every thing literally and is mostly serious 

Character Story:

As a young boy his village was attacked by bandits every  one he new  and loved were killed his village was burnt down as well as. After the village was attacked another village from the west had found out about the village. the Villagers  went to go find survivors but they could only find one person  was  a young boy who was hurt and cover in ashes.The villagers  took him to there village to raise him. for the next  few years he spent his time helping the village by farming building and hunting. in return he was trained  how to fight how to craft and how to biuld.  once he left the village he searched for the bandits day after day night after night  he had given up one trying to find them instead he knew that he had to help others like him others that lost every thing this was his goal in life along the way he has fought found rare item of all sorts and help the poor .He now travels from city to city making a living . He as help tons of people who have been attacked. not much is known about him.He has also been learning how to use the dark arts he knows very little right now but he hopes to learn.

Skin:

 

[AlmondTree 418]

Hello there, after reviewing this and comparing it to the rest of your applications I feel that you are not yet ready. This application will be denied and you will have one month penalty. This means that due to posting five applications now you will be denied automatically until this one month period has ended. 

I will explain the reasons below for our reasoning.

• You've failed to use the correct format more than once and you are also missing things.
• Your character has a lot of red lines, as an example you can't learn magic when you apply, you have to keep your character realistic.
• It feels as if you are disregarding the advice thou's been given on the other applications, we do truly want you to make a successful application but not made the changes we asked for.

 

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This application has been denied and the applicant will be put on one month ban from applying starting from today.

I wish you luck the next time we may see you and hope that you can truly embrace the advice given to you.

 

 

 

[AlmondTree 418]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.