[Denied] Roleplay Application

[Jared 0]

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Space_Hobo

How old are you?: Fourteen

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I do very much agree with your Server's Rules.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with the Rule's regarding for example, Spamming others or saying rude things to one another. I personally hate it when this happens in Roleplay Servers

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): What i did not understand was for example, The Rules regarding War what puzzled me was on how it works and how it is dealt with.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Long story short a Small Server i have Admin on, I found a player who mentioned a HUGE Roleplay Server named Lord Of The Craft So i searched up for this Server and I find myself here.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): I have a few but i no longer have accessibility to the Forum's page on which they are located.

Character’s name: Hared

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Elvish / Elf

Character’s age: 75

Biography : As a boy i was left in the woods, Alone cold took up by a wanderer in the wood's. He raised me and taught me many things for years, And one day i was hunting in the forest only to find myself being captured by an orc and tortured. I was soon to escape after being in the lair of the Orcs for at least a year and a half thanks to the others who made a break for it. After all of it i now have a scar on the left of my face leaving me partially blind but able to see still.

  Years go by and i try to stay away from danger  and to protect my loved ones and friends if i can. I mainly sit in the trees in the woods waiting for any unsuspecting Orcs. I also just hid from everything I could just to keep myself safe... After what they did to me.

  Now i just help any people i meet and do jobs for them, Like going to the next village to grab things and such.

Personality Traits: Hates orcs, Wants to help as many people he can and to find a Companion in the The World of, Lord Of The Craft.

Ambitions: To help Unsuspecting people kill every orc that hurts him or hurts anyone else

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Partially blind in one eye, Has a fear of certain orcs For example the ones he got tortured by. Has a slight limp from falling great heights

Appearance: Dirty blonde with a slight leather tunic and a blue shirt with a old tan white shirt under it, Has green eyes and a scar along the left eye. He is also is seen with leather boots and old blue pants

Skin:

[AlmondTree 418]

Hello hello there Jared! Glad to see you are considering applying to the server, I have looked at the application now and see the application needs some work. You need to change this in order of me to possibly accept your application. I will the reasons below and you will have to wait 6 hours to make another application with the correct changes.

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• You have missed things in your application, such as the definitions. Very important stuff there. Please include those sections.
• Your biography is too short and has to be expanded. Tell a story about your character, who he has done in his life and events that meant something for him.
• Include server lore into the application, any information you need will be on the wiki at this link!
• I think overall that the assassin and orc hatred theme you got is a little bit off the chart, it remains to see but by the looks of it now it's not something I can accept. It is perfectly fine that your character hates orcs but It doesn't sound like an interesting character to me. 

 

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If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issues with your application that I have stated above.

 

[AlmondTree 418]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.