[Denied] Application

[senseisirnipples 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:SenseiSirNippls

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes I am

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The one which says that you have to obey the laws of physics when building/creating something

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found it on youtube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:Playing the role of a character.

What is metagaming?:Using only the knowladge your character has and not what you know

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:When you force actions on other players

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Benjamin Sola

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: Dark Elf

Character’s age: 160

Biography  : Benjamin Sola ran away from his home at an early age becouse he was ignored and not loved by his parents or anyone he knew.Since then Benjamin larned to look out for himself and himself only.He lived in the woods and caves.He learned alot of survival skills and blacksmithing skills since he had to make his own equipment.He wore black and red clothing and he had red eyes.Whenever he saw someone he did his best to avoid them.He doesn't like speaking to people becouse everyone he knew before hated him and he doesn't want anyone else hating him so he avoids everyone.He is a very stealthy persion and he is very good with swords.I guess you can call him an assassin.He also steals food and other resources from passing travelers or traders.He also moves alot becouse he's afraid of raiders and evil people trying to possibly kill him.He always lived in caves on top of giant mountians so it would be harder for anyone to reach/find him.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) : Benjamin is a solo persion which means he only does things by himself.He will not accept help or anything for anyone else becouse he feels like he has to do and earn everything by himself.Some of his habbits are training his running skills and sword skills in case he gets attacked and he needs to run away or if he can't run away defend himself.He dislikes when things don't go his way and end up failing.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) : My character aspires to be a high classed assassin or bounty hunter.Since he has the skills and he's a lone wolf these tasks would not be a problem for him.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) : My character is really good at stealth,blacksmithing and sword skills.He is also really fast and almost noone can catch him when he's running away from danger.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) : His weakness is being ambushed.He can't really run away from that kind of situation.He is also weak when he is outnumbered.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) : My character has black and red clothes and red eyes.He has black hair and he's quite muscular.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) :

 

[AlmondTree 418]

Hello there! Giving the application a few reads and thoughts I see that this application needs to be worked on. I will list them below and deny this application for now, there is simply too much that I see has to change. You may reapply in 24 hours with the changes in mind.

I shall go through each point.

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• Your bio need to be fixed, it doesn't contain a story that I am looking for or any lore references from the Wikipedia. It's about telling a story and events that interests the person reading it and if you only include sentences such as "He likes to hunt. He likes to eat food." then it isn't a story. You need to change this. I want you to write an original character story and include things such as why he wants to become a person that aims to kill for gold, the motivation behind this? 

 

• Your characters strengths. He has basically the whole ordeal and you mention he is very good at these things but what's the fun in being the best? I want you to offer me a balanced character, a realistic one that is not master as so many things. Trust me it will be more fun for you and the person you will possibly Role-play with in the future!

 

• The characters ambitions are fine but I can't see that already having these skills fully developed making any assassination tasks an easy task for him doesn't sound fun to me. Comes back to not making a godly character.

 

• Your characters weaknesses. They have to be something that is a weakness to begin with. Being ambushed and outnumbered is pretty much a weakness everyone shares. Can't accept these.

 

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These are the changes that I hope you can fix when you apply the next sometimes after the 24 hour cooldown that you have from now. If you have any questions or concerns you are free to message me through the forum and I will answer them to my best ability!

Good luck and hope to see these changes! :)

[AlmondTree 418]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.