[Denied] application

[pitmanxd 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft account name?: PITMANXD
How old are you?:18
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The abuse of glitches or any exploits are not tolerated.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: word of mouth/DIAMONDWARLORD
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

What is roleplaying?: roleplaying is when you are given a role and you play it
What is metagaming?:Using out of character information for in character purposes
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Power-emoting or god-emoting is an act of forcing the result of one's actions on another character, typically without the other player's consent and not giving the other character a chance to do anything about the emote. For instance, "Player1 kills Player2", "Player1 hits Player2" and "Player1 steals X gold from Player2" are all power-emotes.

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)   Doldir Larethian

Character’s sex: (male or female?) male
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) elf
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 18
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)  Doldir Larethian was born in the city of Laurelin to a single father in the year of 1537 during the war between the Orenian Empire and the dwarfs which ended in the capture of the dwarven fort. He does not know much about his mother but he does know she was a baker. His father was a city guard in Laurelin and from a young age Doldir wanted to follow in his fathers footsteps and join the elite guard of Laurelin. Through his teenage years Doldir had a slight change in attitude and began to start holding people up at knife point to try and make some quick coin. Through out his entire childhood and teenage years he learnt how to master the bow, which over time he started to gain a keen eye for detail when shooting. When Doldir was not busy robbing people he was in his fathers library reading from the vast collection of books further expanding his knowledge
Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) naughty, taking control, hunting, blood
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) a guard
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) using a bow, hunting
Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) sword skills
Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) 6ft, brown hair, no scars
Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) https://gyazo.com/91d4905019f9249d1f294fba2b4531c3
https://gyazo.com/d6e5aed0a7b8bdbf32e302f8d9ac5522

[AlmondTree 418]

Denied! Sadly you are not allowed to plagiarize which is highly frowned upon. You plagiarized the power-gaming definition which is why this is denied. You will receive a 24 hour ban from applying.

 

Link from where it is plagarized from.

http://wowwiki.wikia.com/wiki/Power-emoting

 

Part from the plagiarizing, when applying again after 24 hours I would also recommend that you write more in your biography, two paragraphs to tell a story about your character. 

 

If you got any further questions feel free to send me a message!

[AlmondTree 418]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.