[Denied] Risingflame09 Whitelist Application

[Risingflame09 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:Risingflame09
How old are you?:11
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes.
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No abusing glitches.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No, I think all these rules are easy to understand!
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking through a list of RP servers, I enjoy these types of servers.
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):N/A

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

What is roleplaying?: Playing as a charactor who you make up, taking him/her on a journey.
What is metagaming?: A strategy.
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Using games or game-like systems

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?): Risen
Character’s sex: (male or female?): Male
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.): Human
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!): 18
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.): Risen was born in a mansion, but at the age of four, the house was burned down, his parents, desperate to to keep Risen alive, died saving him. He started exploring, and after 14, he found the city.
Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?): He has a habit of wanting to kill every bandit he comes across.
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?): A fire warrior (a warrior, who uses fire magic and his sword only).
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?): Swift use of his sword.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?): His rage
Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?): His hair is red and spiky, and he has a scar made from a dragon's claw
Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.): I could not upload the skin screenshot, so I will leave a link to the skin. :http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/8149304/casual-boy/

NOTE: sorry for the slightly different look, I worked on this on a notepad, so the colors and links didn't save.

[Cooliomafia 399]

 

Do not fear! This is not the end! This simply means the requirements that were assigned to the application were not completely fulfilled. The following reasons will be listed below. You may reapply after 24 hours, if you apply sooner than 24 hours you will face denial.

- Your metagame and powergame definitions are incorrect.

- Please incorporate lore inside your biography such as cities he may have visited or wars he may have witnessed.

- Please expand upon your biography, your biography should be two paragraphs, minimum.

- Please expand upon your personality traits, as wishing to kill bandits is not a valid personality trait.

- Please expand upon your strengths and add non-combat strengths.

- Please expand upon your weaknesses and other flaws that he may have other than handling his rage.

- Your skin does not match your appearance description and would not be appropriate for Lord of the Craft's current time period. 

[Cooliomafia 399]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.