[Denied] DJakeB's Application

[DJakeB 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:  DJakeB

How old are you?: 10

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Yes

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:  Minecraft Servers website

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Role playing is a system were you follow a story line

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is "Out of Character" Action

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: It's a type of interaction in games

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Cristopher LongArm

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Mountain Dwarf

Character’s age: 112

Biography  My Character comes from Felson (Oren) but in 1568 (8 years after birth) he lost his mother in a tragic accident . He went to the Cloud temple to seek the help of a old friend of his mothers. She sent him away to Krinfird (Oren). After seeking help there he decided to turn back to his home in Felson (Oren) after another five years in Felson he decided to live near the cloud temple with his mothers closest friend.

After 2 years of living with his mothers friend she disappeared one day and never returned... he still live they to this day...

Personality Traits: Friendly and Kind he likes CHOCOLATE PUDDING and dwarthen made gear he dislikes people going and never coming back and he highly dislikes orcs.

Ambitions: He aspirers to be the man who finds his mother

Strengths/Talents: Fighting and Mining

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Patience and his anger issues

Appearance: Stumpy, Short Orange Hair A FRENCH Moustache and is chubby

Skin:

[jamesb 218]

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- Your metagaming and power gaming definitions are wrong. You may visit HERE, but be sure to use your own wording.

 

- Chris could not have been born in 1650 if he is 112. The current date on LotC is 1562, so Chris would be two years old(he must be at least 18 years of age.)

 

- 1568 hasn't happened yet.

 

- Felsen did not exist 112 years ago, so your character could not have been born there.

 

- Your biography needs more length and information about your character's life. It should be a decent two paragraphs long.

Good luck on your next application!

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