[Denied] Whitelist Application

[Zuth 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: minerman0500

 

How old are you?: 16

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Under Combat rules,  "Proper rp is required before PvP can be called. The roleplay must be initiated and properly advance to conflict before it goes to PvP "  for I find it refreshing since I've seen random fighting and resorting to deadly force without cause in too many game, such a rule is ideal.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): All the rules make sense to me.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Some years ago with a youtuber who featured it, coming across the video with my interest in Minecraft and Lord of the rings at the time.

 

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is to put yourself into character, selecting a role or behavior and portraying it in the most realistic and applicable way possible.

What is metagaming?: To surpass a game's built in or predicted limitations and expand on the platform to further enrich the experience of the player and to strive to a environment that is sought after within the game.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Unfairly imposing ones ones one-sided whims on others for personal connivance.

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name:  Lólindir Vardamir 

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: High Elves

Character’s age: 175

Biography ; Lólindir Vardamir was born and raised in Lin'sulan, growing up in the upper district with his father who was a moderately successful wine merchant he spent his early life surrounded by the trade. One day he was tasked with taking a sizable shipment of quality wines to the Duchy of Istria, but as fate would have it the ship he was to take was attacked and damaged by pirates some nights past. The shipment being so important to his fathers business he had no choice but to buy his way into a smaller, more humble vessel who's route would take him through Savoy as he had plan to do so originally. The ship had other cargo and merchants most notably a party of dwarfs and a half elf. Their drinking and merry-making distracted Lólindir from his agitated state, that was when he noticed a strange high elf dressed in a dark cloak. As he shifted he caught a glance of fine blue robes, his kin's presence there seamed out of place. Lólindir being alone and still somewhat on edge decided to introduce himself, as he stood he quickly stumbled down when a firm and hard thump hit the hull of the ship, he then heard blades being dawned and screams in the upper deck as well as the sound of crackling flames. Quickly making his way to upper deck the severity of the situation sank in, as he saw dark sales off the side of the ship, pirates. Frozen in place, the noticed the same High elf who he was going to approach coming up with a unnerving calmness walking past him to the fray, his hands started to glow with great intensity, the very skies lit up with ever growing thunder and lighting, the clam seas trembled, and with one firm pushing motion he separated the pirates ship, the force was so powerful the pirate ship almost capsized, it's mast fracturing so quickly it was indistinguishable from the thunder. As Lólindir made his way to Istria and back to Lin'sulan his mind was flooded with thoughts of magic and it's wonders. Three years past since then and his thoughts were of nothing else, and so he decided to leave his realm of comfort and seek out the arcane arts.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?); Lólindir likes to have everything planned for, unforeseen complications irritate him but he always finds a way. He is quite by nature and observing, as well as calculating with a uncanny ability to read others. He is also overly proud and insensitive at times. 

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?); He seeks to become a powerful mage like the one who saved him from a potentially violent death.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?); He is talented trader and has a talent for logistics with a keen eye for possible scenarios and the ability to quickly plan for them, and has a exceptionally muscular physique for a high elf.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?); He is reluctant on taking risks, and is too proud and is easily angered by the smallest things.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?); He has very fair skin and thick hair standing at 6'3

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot ; I added it below.

[jamesb 218]

 

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- Your metagaming and power gaming definitions are incorrect. For help with this definitions, you may visit HERE, but be sure to use your own words.

 

- No magic is capable of conjuring thunder and lightning, calming seas and subsequently destroying a ship's mast -- all without exhibiting any signs of fatigue. Yes, a mage could potentially do these things(save for calming the seas), but all with very complicated build-ups, and specific backlashes. Please remove this part from your biography... if you have magic related questions, however, you may send me a PM and I can either answer them or point you in the right direction.

 

- Lin'sulan did not exist 175 years ago. To amend this, you may either make your character younger (no older than 50 -- I would recommend this age, as no elven father would send any elf beneath the age of 50 on a sailing expedition. Elves beneath he age of 50 are considered children.) OR you may replace the locations indicated with your application with locations that existed 175 years ago.

Good luck on your next application!

 

[jamesb 218]

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