[Denied] Application

[Slatman 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:  Flyinite

How old are you?: 
11 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):  Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:  Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  Your skin must be an RP-friendly
representation of your character.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t
make sense? (if so we can help
clear it up!):  No

How did you find out about
Lord of the Craft?:  I was scrolling through a server list and found Lord of the Craft.

Link(s) to past Whitelist
Applications (If applicable):  N/A

 

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)  Zalzar

Character’s sex: (male or female?)
Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable
races here.) 
Human - Farfolk

Character’s age: (upon application, your character
must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred
years old!)  20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three
references to the server
lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) 

Zalzar hails from the far away islands.  He is a world traveler and is looking to become a leader of his people.  Zalzar began his adventures by stowing away on a ship and landing in The Isles of Vailor at the Cloud Temple.  He befriended a captain who brought him throughout The Isles of Vailor and then ultimately back home.

 

Zalzar was born in the year 1527.  When he reached the age of 18, he joined the navy with the intention of helping his people to live in peace with the rest of the world.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's
quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Zalzar is fond of building
and decorating but hates Destruction.  He
can consume mass quantities of alcohol without it affecting him.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Leader of his people and a chef

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really,
really good at?)   Running, drinking
and self-defense

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a
skill that your character needs to work on?)  Cooking and public speaking

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are
they?; hair color?; scars?) Zalzar is 6’2” (one of the tallest
Farfolk ever).  His hair color is brown
and he has a tattoo that resembles the letter “L”.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s
skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[HedgeHug 2049]

[HedgeHug 2049]

Greetings young applicant, your application has been:

 

 

For the following reasons:

 

- You have left out the definitions. This is considered one of the most important aspects of the application and therefore its absence is punished heavily (with denial of the application). Please follow the given format and fill everything in. If you encounter trouble finding the right definitions feel free to contact either me or others from our community, we are eager to help.

 

- The bio of your character is rather short. Though 2 paragraphs it is still lacking depth in your characters history. For instance some depth in his youth, his parents and whatnot. Also adding the source of your strengths and weaknesses could be in your characters biography. (As an example: Your character joined the navy, therefore one of his strengths could be navigating.)

 

- You have left out the skin. If you encounter trouble posting your skin in your application then take a look at this thread.

 

I wish you good luck applicant. If you need help feel free to send me a forum message.

 

 

[HedgeHug 2049]

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