[Denied] White List Application

[Lightning321 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:Lightning321

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13)Yes:

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Meta gaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was searching for role playing servers

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:It is one you play as a person or a thing but u are playing in what they did or believed

What is metagaming?:It is one you get knowledge from someone else and it is different from someone else and u use it against them i am guessing i never realy got this one

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: it is one someone steals player ones diamond sword and player 2 cant do anything about it.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (Atuun)

Character’s sex: (Male)

Character’s race: (Dark elves.)

Character’s age: (20)

Biography  (i come from a land far far away called ebonglade born in anthos but my mother was born in athera we were born on 1996 and i still live on but i never realized i didn't get to know my mother for 18 years i lived with my father see my mother died one i was born but one day i woke up to a spirit of my mother saying my father was in trouble so i went down stairs to find him but i couldn't find him so i got sad and i went to look for him i searched all over anthos but i never found him till i came across 2 travelers that wasnt from around here there names were Jake and Abigail but i didn't realize they were human travelers see i have never seen a human till a guard yelled out human get him and the traveler said no no am friendly i will not attack so the guard stopped and took a look at them and said ive got my eye on you so the guard walked away and still had his eye on him but as i was looking i was looking every were but no were was my father till i walked in the ally way and saw him dead i fell to the ground with my knife crying but i said to myself i will get revenge if it isn't the last thing i do so i asked all around to see if anyone saw who killed me but the only guy who saw something saw a wyvern in the air so i searched land high to ocean low but i never found this wyvern till one day and i finally found him but i said to my self he isn't gonna be friendly so i got my spear and came back and i didn't harm him i didn't know he was friendly so i asked him if he saw what happen to my father and he said ah yes you were that pathetic boy crying and i said who has the spear me or you and he stared at me and said (sigh) you but then he said who has the strength one this side with a smirk i said me but he knew i was joking but it didn't stop me i knew he had the strength and he knew i knew that but still he wasn't scared because he knew i wouldn't harm him its almost like these two should be friends you would say but no a wyvern and a dark elf aint friends of wyvern but that didn't stop me but as i was walking one day i came across a dwarf and we talked and i got interested in mining i hated it but all the stuff you can get from mining diamonds gold iron and all that but i left to go mining so i went mining int he public mine came across so many ores a minerals but i came across a harpy int he field it was gonna attack me so i took out my sword i quickly slained it but i said taht was easy so i got into sword training and i was into it one day i acctuly got a job for slaying beast and i get paid for selling there crap.)

Personality Traits: (He loved to fight?; Eating one he was nervous )

Ambitions: (A mage)

Strengths/Talents: (Fighting cooking and he is strong)

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (Swimming and mining)

Appearance: (He is tall about 6,1 and he has black grayish hair)

Skin: (http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/8863369/dark-elf/ .)

[Harri 4815]

Under review.

[Harri 4815]

Denied.

 

• Your definitions aren't correct/aren't complete. Make sure to look into them more before just saying: i don't get it
• There are an incredible amount of grammatical errors in your application. Remember, this is an english speaking, text based server - if english isn't your first language and you struggle that badly with it, this might not be the server for you.
• All your lore is wrong, pretty much. Dates, places, everything is thrown in randomly. Really go through the wiki and ask people for help before you do your next application.

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

[Harri 4815]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.