[Denied] Application Yukizen

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 What’s your Minecraft account name?:Santinolouman

How old are you?:13

What timezone are you in?:GMT +2

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:hacking,because i hate it so mutch

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no im fine

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: a friend

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is something where you're isolated form your real life. You can choose what to do yourself and you get to choose how your story goes on.

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is something where you use knowledge to change the way you play your character (in roleplay) , and with that i mean using knowlegde from real life that the character in the game doesn't know yet. (it's hard to explain this xD)

 

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Powergaming is something where you aim towards a specific goal. Just acting unfairly or forcing someone to do something. The behaviour could sometimes be a bit offensive (from what i've seen).

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:  Yukizen

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race:  Heartlander

Character’s age: 23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) 

I'm Yukizen.  A dumb little inexperienced man. I've been hated by people in Oren for so long. The only person I could trust is a friend of mine. I believe that she will destroy Oren with her own hands and will unite the people around this world. I've ran away from Oren since my 10th. I didn't know the location of my parents. I'm eventually dreaming that Azzurra (player on the server) will unite the people.

 

What about me? I'm eventually going to surpass every blacksmith out there. I'll be my own guard and i'll smith my own sword. I'm still inexperienced now. But the time will come. I'm now living in Courland that has recently fought with Oren. I will help them take the land that is ours. That is my life in a nutshell.recently fought with Oren. I will help them take the land that is ours. That is my life in a nutshell..

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) he hates oren and he loves Food

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) he wants to surpass every black smith

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) fighting

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He is scared of spiders 

Appearance:gray hear he is 6'4 talle  he has a scar in his right eye blueclothes

 

Skin:

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[jamesb 218]

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- Your definitions are plagiarized. Consider this your only warning -- if you plagiarize again, you will be temporarily banned from applying.

 

- Your biography needs one more piece of lore. For help with this, you may visit HERE.

 

- Your character's traits, strengths and weaknesses, and ambitions are all lacking significantly. Please expand upon them quite a bit!

Good luck on your next application!

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