[Denied] Application #2!

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Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Ashlog (Username) My real Name : Jeloux Enriquez

How old are you?: 13 years old (I forgot to state in my last application that I am turning 14 )

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule about toxicity not being tolerated because this will make roleplaying much more enjoyable!

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope!

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found this server through a youtube video.. But mostly through my curiosity.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting out a character who is fictional/non-fictional. For Example, Peter Pan, William Shakespeare, and more. (In my own words.)

What is metagaming?:  Metagaming is when you look  above someone's name without knowing it in your character's perspective.

What is power-emoting : People who poweremote mostly Roleplay's things which may be impossible to do, leaving the opposite/ other player no chance to fight back. People who uses this focuses most on his own  charater.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name:  William Oathbraker

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s Race: Human

Character’s age:  34 years old

Biography  :      William Oathbraker came from land of Istria, where he grew as the son of a king before the time of a war called the Istric war. He was born to the couple, Joseph the Wise and Andrea Grotto, and lived a luxurious life with full of riches. He was isolated from the poor kids because he was born to be strong and independent. This didn't ended well for him because he became an independent boy which caused many other kids to hate him and talk behind his back. Once his father passed the throne, he ruled his kingdom before the Second Istrian War struck his land. People rebelled against the law because a witch corrupted the mind of the people. Because of this, William decided to leave Istria to live peacefully alone and hopefully rebuild his empire from the ground up. His goals are pretty simple, seek justice to who brought down his kingdom. Legend has said that he traveled to Salvus to the north and found his inner self there because his cape has been seen in dreams of people who live in that city. After he left, his identity became more of a mystery and probably will be forgotten. Even though he was once a wise ruler, people call him a vigilante among The Isles of Vailor because he broke the oath of being a ruler. This is the reason why he is called William Oathbraker.

                     6 years of being a mystery, he is now 34 years old and a strong man. He hides in the dark to serve the light and will hopefully find some companions for his journey of redemption. In the black market, he is counted as a mercenary and has been hired by countless kings to assassinate people. He doesn't truly support this, but he needs to earn his reputation so that he can be trusted. According to the many kings he served, William is a new entire man and it is hard to recognize his face. Other mercenary's fear his eye scar and counts it as a symbol of danger. William didn't really have a lot to say but he did wrote a book where he addressed some quotes that were pretty deep. It has been lost in years because of the Storms brought to the land where it once was. A lot of secrets have been kept in that book and it was a vital clue to where William was. People thought that he took the book so that no one can track him down and so did the kings. People wondered until William showed again to assassinate one unwise ruler and people where not happy about it. This led people to scout the area where most clues have been located. After days of finding, none has been found and this troubles a lot of people. He's final words were this, "Strike me down, and I am gonna get back up." Also, the people that also heard this, "Death walks among you..." This quote symbolizes the story of William Oathbraker.

 

Personality Traits:  He mostly goes out during the night and is rarely seen during the day.  He likes living alone. He doesn't like anybody bothering him. He is a dependent man.

Ambitions: He wants to be a model for everyone but in a private way.

Strengths/Talents:  His combat is superior and will not be judged by others.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:  Friendship and Charisma. He doesn't like people to teach him lessons about wisdom and his strength.

Appearance: He looks like a rugged man that has been in a rumble. 6 foot 3" , Blond Colored hair. Has a big Eye Scar.

Skin:  http://i.imgur.com/uTcyG95.png[/img

[jamesb 218]

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- Your metagaming is incorrect. If you need with this definition, you may visit HERE, but be sure to use your own words.

 

- Your character cannot be a noble in your biography.

 

- There are no such wars known as the "Istric war" and the "Second Istrian War"

 

- Witches cannot corrupt the minds of people. I'd leave magic lore out of your application.

 

- Salvus does not currently exist, nor would it have existed in your character's lifetime.

 

- Please add some non-combat based strengths.

 

- The whole mercenary theme is quite cliche, but I will not require you to change it. I will only strongly recommend that you do, as characters like this are nearly impossible to play in-game, and are generally frowned upon.

 

Good luck on your next application!

 

[jamesb 218]

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