[Denied] 2225whitewolf's - Application Format!

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please
do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server
and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: 2225whitewolf

How old are you?: 15 (in august 16)

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes , I surely did.

What’s
the rule you agree with the most?: the rule that cyber-bullying isn’t allowed.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:  I whas searching on the web for a  good RPG server which is hard to find.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel
free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but
make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of
another website or person! Plagiarizing
will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What
is roleplaying?: This is the ‘art’ of becoming a character with his own emotions and acts which u will play and act as.

What
is metagaming?: This is knowing things, that you normally can’t know .

What
is power-emoting (powergaming)?: This is the use of sentences with ‘happening’ things were the other player can’t react to it like: you do something and the other person isn’t able to defend himself.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be
creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually
want to play.

 

Character’s name: Fandir

Character’s
sex: male

Character’s race: (High) Elf

Character’s age: 18

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): I was born on August 22, 1997 in the Silver Enclave of Haelum. I was not a regular elf as the others, I always tryd to sneak out for adventures outside of the always nice but boring kingdom. Sadly enough I’ve always been caught on the boarders of the city, or even when trying to sneak out of the house. The feeling inside me that wants to explore doesn’t seem to go away by the slightest of bits so I keep trying attempts to leave the city. Because of these attempts I don’t really have a lot of friends, because I’m different or the fact that there just aren’t many people of my race that are my race, so I have to amuse myself a lot of the times to not die of boredom and I do that is these ways: I talk to myself, and the animals that live ‘with’ us, I also train a lot of my archery skills to become the best archer that ever existed or make plans to escape. And this time I was sure that my plan would work, and I would finely be able to explore the whole world with the good and evil that lies in it. Traveling to every place existing.   

Personality
Traits: Talks to himself and the creatures, is very pessimistic, enjoys
exploring the world and dislikes to be dependent by others.

Ambitions: Wants to be the best archer and know as much as he can from the world.

Strengths/Talents: Archery, surviving on his own

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He needs to become better at close range combat.

Appearance: Young,
white/gray hair, tanned skin, no scars, 1m 94cm tall

Skin:

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

 

Hello, Applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your definitions of Power-emoting and Metagaming are vague. Please explain them more in-depth with your own words. You may use google to gain more information about what they are, but please do not copy-paste them onto your application. We'd love to hear it from your own words;
• Your bio indicates your character was born in the year 1997. The current year on the server is 1566, medieval times. Please adjust it to a more appropriate date;
• Your biography is vague, please go in detail when telling us about the backstory of your character. What major events happened to them? Why were they in the castle in the first place? Why does the castle government not let your character leave the castle? We'd love to hear about the details;
• Talking to animals is a magical ability which is used by the druids. Your character can not start with magic, as they will need to find a willing magic teacher to teach them the art;
• Your character's ambitions are vague. Please do tell us about what your character want to achieve in their life, apart from surviving and archery;
• The appearance part of your application is vague. We're expecting a detailed description on how your character physically looks such as their hair colour, stature, skin tone and etc;
• The "Skin" part of your application is not filled. Please add a skin you will use for your character.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

[EdgyMagey 787]

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