[Denied] Jason_Lukas's Application

[Jason_Lukas 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Jason_Lukas

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Rule 2 of the combat rules, that rp must initiate a combat encounter.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): N/A

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: The Magic of Google

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

What is Roleplay?: The act of assuming a character of your own design and creating a life for them and playing their role.

What is Metagaming?: Metagaming is a method of using out of character and out of the rules, ways to find people or do other things In Character

What is Powergaming?: Powergaming is using methods not allowed for fighting or transportation.

Character’s name: Mors Circumdate

Character's Sex: Male

 Character's Race: Human

 Character's Age: 32

Biography:

As a young boy Mors lived with his highlander family of 5 in the forest. He lived a happy life travelling to all the exotic places his parents could find. The peering eyes of strangers piercing the veil of privacy is what scared the boy most. He was afraid that one day one person may peer to far and kill one of the ones he loved. Alas good things must come to an end, as one night after Mors had went to sleep he heard the screams of his sister, Gales, and his brother, Jason. They had attempted to keep a man out of their cottage and they died because of their bravery. Their mother bent over the two bodies left to never come back .

  Now left with just his father he leaves that old house. Climbing a tall hill he buried His Sister, His Mother, and his Brother. Leaving them there with only wooden markers to serve for gravestones Mors and his father travelled. Until Mors reached the age of 16, they went as far as they could. Leaving his dying father in the care of relatives, Mors revisits those Markers he left so long ago. He kneeled infront of his mother's and let his mind wander for almost an hour before standing and leaving that old cottage and those old peices of wood behind.

At the age of 20 he visited his relatives again. His father was dead, buried under his supposed favorite tree. He left in tears, never to look back on that old cottage or that old tree again.

 

Personality Traits: Sad,Kind, Annoying at times

Ambitions: Mors aspires to just be happy and travel.

Strengths/Talents: Drawing and Swordplay

Weaknesses: Can be weak at the mentioning of his parents

Appearance: Brown Hair, Caucasian Skin, And a scar across his left eye

 Skin:

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Edited July 6, 2016 by Jason_Lukas

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-Your power-gaming definition is incorrect.

 

-Your character's biography includes no server lore.

 

-Having one's character's parent(s)/family killed by a random unnamed force or character is unfathomably cliche, and overused. IF you wish to have your character's backstory include family members dying tragically, please use a more original reason.

 

-You dont explain in your biography where your character got his skills.

 

-Your character's weakness... Isnt really a weakness. Firstly, you dont define what it does. Does the mention of his parents make him physically weak? Emotionally?

 

-Likewise, given that these parents exist solely in your character's biography, no-one ingame has any capacity to know them, so hence, bringing them up would be impossible.

 

-You need to expand upon your character's appearance and personality.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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