[Denied] white list app

[nedkelly69 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: nedkelly69

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:

You may not kill more than 20% (1 for every 5) of another player's livestock for any reason. If a pen has four or less of a specific animal within it, you may not kill any of that animals.

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Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: youtube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:  the acting out or performance of a particular role

What is metagaming?:  is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: example, typing "Player1 tries to stab Player2 in the chest with his sword" will give Player2 a chance to dodge or parry the blow.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Jim

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) farmer

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 25

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

Jim parents was an aussie farmer, Jim wants to carry the family pride of farming he is from Australia. Jim has travelled to many places like the end. he was born and breed in Australia. Jim has a lot of knowledge on farming and wants to make a living. his mum was killed in a car crash 4 years ago and his father is very sick. Jim best mate lives in krinfird, Jim meet his wife in salvus and has his 1st boy in courland. Jim like farming and craking a cold one every arvo. Jim is very young thats why this bio isnt ling

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)

LIKES :)

-Beer

-friendly people

-farming

-shagging

-dog

-live stock

DISLIKES :(

-Trespassers

-poachers

 

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)

A Farmer

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)

Farming

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)

Fitness

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)

Jim is 6.4ft tall, brown hair, has a scar down his face and a tan man

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

Greetings, Applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your definitions of Roleplay, Metagaming and Power-emoting are clearly plagerized. You may use information from the internet to learn about the terms, but please explain the terms in your own words; rather than copy-pasting them. Repeating this will result in a 24-hour ban from applying;
• Farmer is not an applicable race. Please choose one of the races specified in the lore (Human, Elf, Orc, Dwarf, Kha etc.);
• Your bio suggests that your character is from Australia. This is not possible since Australia is not a location in the server's lore, which can be found here:  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page ;
• Your likes and dislikes are vague, please explain them in detail.
• Please remove 'shagging' from the likes, overtly sexual content is strictly forbidden on the Lord of the Craft;
• Your ambitions are vague, we'd love to hear about what your character aspires to be other than a farmer;
• Your character's strengths and weaknesses are vague. We'd love to hear about what your character is good and not-so-good at in detail;
• Your application doesn't have a skin attached to it. Please add the minecraft skin you will use for your character;
• Your biography states that your character's mother died in a car crash. The Lord of the Craft is a premium Medieval themed role play server, taking place in the times of kingdoms, catapults, magic and such;
• Your biography is lacking server lore. Please do connect your character to the server's lore by including a valid place of birth; and as I suggest, including your character in a few events or his opinion of them.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

Please do not hesitate to contact me via forum PMs for any questions or concerns regarding the application procedure. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

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