[✗] superski1106's application form

[superski1106 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:superski1106

How old are you?:12

What timezone are you in?:British Summer Time

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Spreading of personal information will result in a ban of six months

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found it on the internet

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):None

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:Pretanding to be another person for the sake of a game

What is metagaming?:Going off the limits of the game

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Forcing your actions on someone else

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Mireneth

Character’s sex: (male or female?)Female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)Wood Elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)35

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)My name is Mireneth and I come from Lorraine. When I was 10 my family sent me away to Felsen. This was because my father said I got in his way. Later when I was 16 I felt like I didn't belong in the capital and so I moved again. I only moved to Savoy as it wasn't far to go alone.

I was born in 1541 and was an only child. My mother died when I was just 8 years old leaving my dad to take care on me. My dad thought I got in his way and so I was often sent to do chores around the house. But even when I was doing as I was told to he still shouted at me. He only kept me till I was 10 and then he had just had enough of me. That is why I was sent away.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)Habits: twirling my hair, picking flowers and dancing. Likes: flowers, color, decorating and fighting. Dislikes: Orcs, dull things and my father.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)I want to be a professional archer.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)Shooting.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)Sword fighting.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)Height: 6' 2'' Hair: dark blond Eyes: blue

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

Greetings, applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• We know you have heard of the Lord of the Craft server on the internet. Please specify the exact location where. Was it a server list website? Perhaps the few youtube videos about the LotC? Please specify;
• Your character's biography is vague and short. This part is one of the most important parts of an application, as it gives the Application Team a chance to learn more about your character. The Application Team expects applicants to write at least two paragraphs of medium length in the biography part.What have they gone through? How was their childhood? What events changed them? Please be more in-depth in that part too. 
• The server's Role Playing is done in third-person emoting. So, It's not "I did blah blah.", It's more like "Mireneth did blah blah.", please write your biography according to that, in third person.
• Your character's ambitions, strengths and weaknesses are vague, undetailed. Please explain in-depth what your character is good at doing other than "shooting", what he needs to work on other than close combat, and what he aspires to be other than a "professional archer". The Application Team expects applicants to provide their application with at least three strengths and three weaknesses, consisting of mental traits as well as physical. A few examples to that would be: patience, sense of humour etc.
• Felsen is the capital for humans, but your character is a wood elf. This is not really a neccesity but your application would be more solid if you followed the wood elven lore, using places that they inhabit. The lore can be found here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves
• Your definitions for powergaming and metagaming are vague, and I believe your metagaming definition is incorrect. You may find additional information in the link below, but please DO NOT copy-paste the definitions, as we'd love to hear them out from your own words. 

 

You may re-apply after waiting for 24 hours.

Please do not hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs for any questions or concerns you have regarding the application procedure. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.