[✗] My application

[Ninjino55 0]

Minecraft username: Ninjino55

Age: 12

Time Zone: England

Am I aware the server is PG13: Yes

Have You Read and agreed to the rules: I Have read the rules carefully

What rules do I agree with most: No Cyber-Bullying,  keeping roles (because random conversation annoy me) and no sharing accounts.

DEFINITIONS

What is roleplaying: Roleplaying is where you play a (online) game and you play as a certain role that you either choose or create, games that use the roleplaying feature are: Pokémon, the legend of Zelda, animal crossing.

What is MetaGaming: MetaGaming is where you use outside information that your character doesn't know to benefit you and advance you in the game. E.G: YouTube walkthroughs, Wikipedia, information sites, Any Info In general that would do that.

What is PowerGaming: PowerGaming is typing/saying things like " *stabs Joe and kills him* "  this is forcing other players to do something and wont let them re-act in a way... the proper use would be " *tries to stab Joe, Aiming for the [body part/object]* "

 

Character name: Ninjino

Character sex: Male

Race: Dark elf

Age: 25

Biography:  was born in savoy 1516(the massacre o wett) and was raised in a rough background watching older boys doing small fist fights and always tried to watch them. when he was 10 his brother died in a plague. devastated by the death of his brother he tried to stay away from violence. at 15 he got into a knife fight and got a red scar all down hi face so he can only see with one eye.

 

Now at age 20 he locks himself up in his house gaining the knowledge that his brother was actually murdered, only coming out 15 times a year. Finally at age 25 he realises that his brothers murderer is still out their and he is doing nothing for his life. he decides to pack up and live for his brother with the ambitions to explore and to find his brothers murderer and to end the mystery once and for all... 

 

Origins: Born 1516 (the massacre of wet), born in savoy, never travelled anywhere except Istria

 

Personality: shy, brave, lonely, determined/focused, trusting, honest (lies if necessary)

 

Goal: The most powerful dark elf in the whole world and to explore !!!

 

Good At: Magic archery and Climbing (parckour)

 

Bad At: Swordsmanship (partly), solving mysteries.

 

Appearance: Grey skin (fade light), Red eyes, grey hair, a scar that makes one of his eyes no colour just white.

 

My original Application

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-Your application is strewn with typos and errors. Please try to proofread your application next time.

 

-Your character's biography is rather incoherent. Your character's brother died of the plague, yet than wasnt killed by the plague yet was murdered? And this was discovered through... sitting in a house?

 

-You dont explain where your character got their skills, in which seems to be in direct contrast to their life style. Where would a agroraphobic man learn to do archery or parkour?

 

-You need to expand on your character's biography. What did he actually do with his time? Where're his parents?

 

-You're not allowed to apply with any form of magical knowledge, abilities, or qualities.

 

-You need to balance your character's skills and weaknesses.

 

-Your character seems to contradict themselves in a few areas. They're honest- but will lie? Brave yet unable to leave their own house?

 

-Your format is a fair bit off in many areas. Try to copy and paste the initial format, and include both the questions, and answers.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.