[✗] My Application for whitelist

Ninjino55 · August 12, 2016

OUT OF CHARACTER INFOMATION:

Minecraft Account name: Ninjino55

Age: 12

Time zone: England

I am aware of the server being pg13

I have read the rules and agree with all of them

I agree most with: no cyber-bullying, keeping character, no cursing and your skin must be role play friendly

the only rules I am confused with are the ones including meta gaming and power gaming but I will look into those and find out the meaning.

I found it searching for "minecraft rp servers"

I have logged into the server once but have not seen much (yet)

IN-CHARACTER INFOMATION:

Character name: Ninjino (only because I'm most familiar with it)

Character sex: Male (boy)

Race: Dark elf

Character age: 250 (I chose this because I assumed they live to about 500 so I wanted to be about middle... if 500 isn't the dying age please make it a little under the half the dying age)

Biography (please tell me if I'm wrong with this because I'm not too sure with a biography):

was born a prince to the dark elves but left at age 200 due to being forced to marry a witch (reasons unknown) I was found by the magician merlin sneaking out of the caves and was taken to the other side of the world for 45 years to train in magic and archery. 3 years after graduation he returns, officially re-naming himself as Ninjino to explore his home land and to show that power can come in all shapes and sizes

Character origins: my character comes from the caves of vandoria and was born on June 3rd 1415 and has journeyed to the cloud temple (spawn)

Personality: shy, brave, lonely, determined/focused, trusting, honest (lies if necessary)

Goal: The most powerful dark elf in the whole world and to explore !!!

Good At: Magic (if its in the server) archery and Climbing (parckour)

Bad At: Swordsmanship (partly), solving mysteries.

Appearance: Grey skin (fade light), Red eyes, grey hair, a scar that makes one of his eyes no colour just white.

please consider my application I <3 role plays in minecraft and will love to be apart of this one :)

Edited August 12, 2016 by Ninjino55
corret my biography :)

Bvie · August 12, 2016

DENIED

Your application has been denied due to the following reason(S):

Your application does not follow the proper format: missing the three definitions.

Your biography is not 2 paragraphs long.

Your biography does not reference 3 specific pieces of server lore.

Your biography has you as being a Prince, which is not allowed for new applicants.

Your biography references Merlin, which is not part of our server's lore.

Your biography has you learning magic for 45 years, which is not allowed for new applicants.

Your characters origin/birth does not coincide with events, location, and time frame.

Truthfully, you even question if certain things are allowed/part of the server in the application, which shows that you haven't taken enough time to do research about the server before applying for it. I strongly suggest you take the time you will have with this denial to not only rewrite your application, and address the above issues, but to also look more into the server, its Wiki, and its forums. You should come onto the server with some knowledge, not all, otherwise you'll be climbing an even steeper hill that new players go through.

Here are some links to help you resolve your issue(s):

Application Template:

Roleplaying:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying

Metagaming:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

Power-emoting:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

LotC Wikipedia:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

Vailor Lore(Most Recent Map):

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor